An Ever Love Poem by Sandra Feldman
An Ever Love
Poetry!
You are the blood
Within me,
The force of my dwindling
Tide,
My ocean of feelings
All emotion, inside!
A strange life,
From which, I cannot
Nor want to hide!
My deepest Love,
And even sometimes,
My dearest child.
I think 'Nor want to hide' could be better, such as 'Don`t want to be apart.' It`s a little strange the thought of hiding from poetry as one would hide from a person..
Superbly said, amazingly told and the most powerful words in this excellent poem 5 Stars full I have enjoyed very very much. Thank you so much for sharing!
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5/4/2024 8:20:14 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Yes Sandra your words are very true. Poetry is in our blood.