An Everlasting Love Poem by Delicate Heart

A very lovely piece...10

Aw! It is quite a beautiful poem +10

It is what your heart speaks, and very well expressed.

I enjoy this poem delicate heart, it has already been critiqued enough. They have shown you were it could be even better. So as It is, It is a good read for me! Thanks for the invite and I will be looking for more of your work.

i must agree with uilliam, because i also spotted the change from 'her' to 'him' all in all it is a good write.

nicely penned loving lines...very emotive cheers

i like the way you presented love in a new light gives a lot to ponder on great poem

this is a great poem! it was written beautifully

see what love can do? ..it's a delicate feeling..grace

Indeed, we are all fools without love..........beautifuly written..