An Experiment With Allusions Poem by Savita Tyagi

An Experiment With Allusions

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To know thyself through aesthetic
Turn every act into an augury,
Only then you can see
‘The world in a grain of sand,
Or a heaven in a wild flower'.
The ‘auguries of innocence' become boundless.
The eyes that appreciate the ‘Brilliant Golden Lid
Covering the Truth',
Aren't too far away from the Truth.

‘All the World's A stage'
Each of our act presents an opportunity
For its finest playing, a finer eye needed
To appreciate the essence of bliss
Running through it.
Aesthetic is the way the Director of Life
Looks at our roles in his creation.
We mortals are the one touched and moved
By its grief and joy.
‘Too hard for us is heaven's indifference.'

Note: Few days back I was inspired to write the first sentence of this poem. Later it was forgotten. A day or two later I came across an article about Allusions and all of a sudden I was inspired to turn the above sentence into a short poem. Bellow are the Allusions that I used for my first experiment with Allusions.

‘The world in a grain of sand
Or a heaven in a wild flower'
Auguries Of Innocence
William Blake

‘Golden lid covering the truth'
Esha Upanishad

All The World's A Stage
Shakespeare' As You Like It'

‘Too hard for us is heaven's indifference.'

Sri Aurobindo's Savitri Book VI Canto I

Savita Tyagi
3.12.2021

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 17 March 2021

Excellent poem..Indeed, We mortals are the one touched and moved By its grief and joy.

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Anyhow the allusion has so beautifully been applied.To see a World in a Grain of Sand And a Heaven in a Wild Flower, Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand And Eternity in an hour. Beautiful

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Captain Cur 17 March 2021

You have chosen interesting and insightful allusions and filled the body of your poem with your own unique thoughts and ideas!

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Kostas Lagos 19 April 2021

Impressive piece of poetry! Excellent

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me poet yeps poet 16 March 2021

‘The world in a grain of sand Or a heaven in a wild flower' Auguries Of Innocence William Blake EXCELLENCE TO HIM CNVEY KINDLY FOR THIS ILLUMINATION AND YOU ALLUSION BASIS OF REMEMBRANCE

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Susan Williams 04 April 2022

It is refreshing to see how you handle weighty topics in a poem--the poem still glides while delving deep into weighty topics---now this is great writing...5 star poem for sure

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Bri Edwards 08 June 2021

I'll 'have to' look up another poem from you someday, but not tonight, my friend. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 08 June 2021

Well, Savita, i must say 'Composing a comment on PH is still sometimes a struggle.' Do i dare read the poem AGAIN? ;)

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Bri Edwards 08 June 2021

Ha! I was thinking 'illusions' when i read 'allusions'! And 'augury' i may have never used before. Also, 'aesthetic' is not a word i have a command of. All in all the poem posed problems for me. ; (

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me poet yeps poet 11 May 2021

GR8888 POEM SINCETHEN NO MORE WRITTEN

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