An Impossible Life Poem by Crimson Love

An Impossible Life

Rating: 5.0


Lies and deception
make up the frame,
lost within the pain all the same,
Lost in the devils illusion,
Filling your thoughts with that of his own,
Beckon my soul to the deepest recesses of my heart,
Let it fade away within the love I can give,
Let it be known to have died and lived,
Death only bringing life,
Life only bringing death,
We all live to die, sadly we can't die before we live,
Some take their life for granted,
never fully living a life that to some could be unlivable,
You play the cards givin to you,
you make it your own,
Lost in the devils ways, Its time to leave this home,
venture farther from your roots,
spring towards the sky,
Fly on the wings of an angel,
let an impossible life, live to be possible.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 09 November 2011

'Death only bringing life, Life only bringing death, ' What a musical fife is this! Deep runs the themes but style of the poet floats on the waters. I ponder on those 2 lines as every other is same... I am intrigued by your thought process! Is the one who went to heaven abode leaving you so mourning is it your family member or a close friend? ***** Star is your poem!

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Jacqui Broad 11 October 2011

Thanks, this one is a real eye-opener. Life bringing death, Death bringing life. Brilliant in its truth. Like all people I've also wondered what's this life for if one day you're there no more? Oh, to unfold the mystery...

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Unwritten Soul 30 September 2011

The idea was nicely intense, this poem has wise touch...Keep it up crimson, this sound cool, bright and dark...yet it still crimson and it's good :) _Unwritten Soul

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Dave Walker 30 September 2011

Really like this. Make the most of life because Before you know it its over. Good write.

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