An Interior Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

An Interior

Rating: 5.0


Hey my dear soul
My dear aching heart
Let me tell you both
Few words I know
Which you too may know

Many notable winners
In our history had met
With heartbreaking obstacles
But they refused to stop
By those defeats in life

Many strong hearts
Have many scars
With deeper cuts
Those cuts and scars
Had made them brave

To be the one
In a million
Is not so easy
It’s a hardest path
It spills lot of blood

Finally if you know
There is always one
Who keeps watching?
Then trust him and move
He will show you justice

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janell Cressman 02 July 2009

Brilliant write! ! ! ! ! ! such a well expressed poem, if you have a strong heart, you have a stronger person. if things were always easy then know one would learn anything, amazing poem! ! ! ! !

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Louis Rams 02 July 2009

an excellent write! the last two lines says it all. A DOUBLE TEN

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Ted M 02 July 2009

Nice use of words Kranti

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rago rago 02 July 2009

very good write then move trust him who will should you jutice....... the inner consciousness which willl show the path...... ushering in good write....

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Surya . 02 July 2009

very interesting. verygood write. last para is interesting voted10 surya

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love to oneself and its tragedies and comedies nice poem.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 April 2010

‘Many strong hearts/Have many scars’ Because its feeling heart Not blunt one with rhino skin thickness Excellently poemed. Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Antonio Liao 25 January 2010

“A clings of victory breathe”.... the power of the heart that brings the soul to reach the glorious hope to fight......the stamina that conquer all the pain for honor and sprinkles hope with a hope....very reflective write. God bless...a 10 +++

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Saadat Tahir 15 July 2009

your beloved BAPU...Ghandiji...insrtantly comes to mind a great icon...larger than life size...dont make em any more like they used to your split view is endearing seemingly seeing urself l; evitating above soul and heart which u see sepeartely...fresh idea very well written cheers

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Eyan Desir 02 July 2009

Interesting piece with great flow

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