Axiom Of Life Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Axiom Of Life
In my eyes of heart
In my heart of eyes
Magical moon had lit
Many stars smiled
Over my clouded heart
On my drums of heart
On my heart of drums
Songs played magically
Music oozed slowly
Over my beat less heart
To my dreams of heart
To my heart of dreams
Life roused freshly
Smile smiled smilingly
On dry lips of my heart
For my life of heart
For my heart of life
Colors faded naturally
Season changed timely
For me to be my part
'Heart is life and life is heart'-This is well expressed in the poem.
the poem is right in size... you have used 'easy to understand' words... you formed the poem with good organization... what can i say? well done...
Finest play of words with blend of excellent theme… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK
A different way of words, very unusual on life...interesting and excellent....thanks ..and thanks for your comments on my poems too
'soon my heart murmur'....so magical and excellent perfume of the Heart....thank you for sharing this lovely and loving smooth of line in the Hammocks of life.....God bless....a 10 +++++
stunning and touching...this was woven with a magical song and your lines has a very nice flow....great!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/19/2024 11:01:06 AM # 1.0.0.1119
All seems to be music at times