Axiom Of Life Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Axiom Of Life

Rating: 5.0


In my eyes of heart
In my heart of eyes
Magical moon had lit
Many stars smiled
Over my clouded heart

On my drums of heart
On my heart of drums
Songs played magically
Music oozed slowly
Over my beat less heart

To my dreams of heart
To my heart of dreams
Life roused freshly
Smile smiled smilingly
On dry lips of my heart

For my life of heart
For my heart of life
Colors faded naturally
Season changed timely
For me to be my part

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 09 December 2009

All seems to be music at times

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Rajaram Ramachandran 09 December 2009

'Heart is life and life is heart'-This is well expressed in the poem.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 December 2009

the poem is right in size... you have used 'easy to understand' words... you formed the poem with good organization... what can i say? well done...

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Anju Addanki 10 December 2009

a wonderful one fantastic.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 December 2009

Finest play of words with blend of excellent theme… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK

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Indira Renganathan 14 December 2009

A different way of words, very unusual on life...interesting and excellent....thanks ..and thanks for your comments on my poems too

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Louis Rams 12 December 2009

beautifully written, a job well done. a ten

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Eyan Desir 11 December 2009

Sweet music to the soul....

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Antonio Liao 11 December 2009

'soon my heart murmur'....so magical and excellent perfume of the Heart....thank you for sharing this lovely and loving smooth of line in the Hammocks of life.....God bless....a 10 +++++

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Catrina Heart 10 December 2009

stunning and touching...this was woven with a magical song and your lines has a very nice flow....great!

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