An Omen Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
An Omen
We all love in deep
That makes us reap
A smile even in sleep
It gives us lot of heap
And makes us to leap
One-day time will peep
And it will slowly creep
To make clean sweep
Of all our hearts keep
And makes us asleep
Its like falling from steep
Life seems to be cheap
In pain of close sheep
With no one to beep
It makes us to weep
Slowly time will seep
Like a chimneysweep
It wakes us from dogsleep
But let the hearts outweep
So we will never oversleep
It’s words from heartdeep
'Slowly time will seep Like a chimneysweep It wakes us from dogsleep But let the hearts outweep So we will never oversleep It’s words from heartdeep' I like these rhymes kanthi.... and nice lively write indeed.. great words of wisdom! ! ! with love shan
hi karanthi very directed and worked out rhyme... great effort there cheers
‘Rhyme in chime Fine n’ fine Forget whine Love is sublime Twine n twine’ ~ niv…excellent poetry Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Nice presentation, with a statutory warning. You sound like a Philosopher.
Great poem with fabulous end rhymes......................................10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
4/26/2024 10:07:04 PM # 1.0.0.1119
a lovely poem with great rhyme put in. but is not rhyme a little too much voted10 surya