Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # An Unplanned Journey - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

no travel agent
no travel schedule
no tickets taken
no luggage packed there in
no money taken even
no idea where am goin
no plans of destination even
no....going is not my decision even

like a child
pulled out of it's play
by its parent
i walk along
leaving behind.. body

Comments about # # An Unplanned Journey by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • (10/18/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    that final journey.....some anxiously await it...some fear it...some don't even bother... whatever be the case the journey has to be taken for once and for ever. (Report) Reply

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  • (7/12/2009 6:29:00 AM)

    you bring out well the message on meaning of life...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (7/8/2009 3:45:00 AM)

    very soulful write...
    When we travel towards our 'main' destination...
    leaving our body behind us...very touching..very true..
    very nice write Sam...

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  • Meggie Gultiano (7/7/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    and i want to add this, Sam..We are nothing.Somewhere, you left a message and this is very powerful for me..I love this (Report) Reply

  • (7/4/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    Very profound and different samanyan. Our imaginations can take us wherever we want to go.
    10 Karin Anderson
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  • (7/2/2009 4:46:00 AM)

    A soul write indeed. Strength for the journey,
    my friend.10+.

    Warm regards,

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  • (6/30/2009 1:02:00 AM)

    Amazing write....apt thoughts and descriptions...we all do so many things by obligation of duty without applying our soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Really a good read...Thanks!
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  • (6/29/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Like pulling a tree out of the ground. - NOTHING (Report) Reply

  • Raj Arumugam (6/29/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    an exciting out-of body experience? (Report) Reply

  • Louis Rams (6/28/2009 8:31:00 PM)

    when the soul leaves its shell, it's moving quite well.
    the soul is taken a second look at what it has to do.

    gr8t write a ten
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  • (6/28/2009 7:53:00 PM)

    No plans best and enjoy no plans only insurance life is beautiful
    .a....10 regards...
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  • Fay Slimm (6/28/2009 9:40:00 AM)

    We can all take that journey at any time Sam - -and glad you have reminded us of the opportunity we have to be - - just free....10 + ++ Fay (Report) Reply

  • Smiley Hooker (6/28/2009 2:03:00 AM)

    Very impressive, Sam. Don't leave yet, we need you here.: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (6/27/2009 9:32:00 PM)

    True when we came, we were empty handed. When we take the final journey, we go empty handed. This truth is highlighted in the poem well. (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2009 9:13:00 PM)

    mental telepathy...or is it only a vision? ...naizz (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2009 11:52:00 AM)

    a journey in a dream must be.....interesting...10 (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Martyres (6/27/2009 11:13:00 AM)

    A great piece leave your reader to decipher the nature of your unplanned journey....10 from me (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2009 9:54:00 AM)

    Death a parent who leads us
    From this child's play on earth
    To other worthy work on high
    What a stupendous thought
    The parent holds our hand
    And leads us on, so, no fear
    Other players may shed a tear
    But soon forget and resume to play!
    As always your thoughts are so different, refreshing and inspiring.
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  • (6/27/2009 7:43:00 AM)

    carefree attitude like that of child if we carry it along as an adult is always misunderstood as irresposibility....?
    good thought 10.
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  • Ramesh T A (6/27/2009 7:41:00 AM)

    A free ticketless journey reserved for all at any moment in life! True! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 27, 2009

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