You forgive me for loving you too much,
and I'll forgive you for not loving me enough.
You forgive me for raising you so high,
and I'll forgive you for making me cry.
You forgive me for begging you to stay,
and I'll forgive you for walking away.
You forgive me for the loud racing of my heart,
and I'll forgive you for not hearing it.
You forgive me for thinking of you all night,
and I'll forgive you for not treating me right.
You forgive me for waiting by the phone to answer your call,
and I'll forgive you for not calling at all.
You forgive me for giving you my heart,
and I'll forgive you for breaking it apart.
You forgive me for wanting to be with you,
and I'll forgive you for avoiding me.
Forgiveness brings inner peace,
so do we have a deal?
i like the sentiments of this one it echoes a bit in my poem 'i'm a liar and your a fake', it is good to get these feelings out and done with
woww i love this one, although forgivness brings peace sometimes it's peaceful not to forgive everything and everyone
Very nicely done Tanvi! I like the way you ended it! 'Do we have a deal'(lol)
awesome. the poem ends with a bang. loved it. keep writing. wonderfully penned down. thank you very much.
Hi Tanvy, Thank you for sharing your poem.It is a nice poem indeed.I have enjoyed it
very touching piece.straight from the heart.brilliant writing.lol.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
perfect..sweeet... well written and meaningful... the idea is as rich as it has expressed with a unique way... quite impressive is this poem...loved it 10/10