And Forg! Ve Me.... Poem by tanvi damle

And Forg! Ve Me....

Rating: 3.5


You forgive me for loving you too much,
and I'll forgive you for not loving me enough.
You forgive me for raising you so high,
and I'll forgive you for making me cry.
You forgive me for begging you to stay,
and I'll forgive you for walking away.
You forgive me for the loud racing of my heart,
and I'll forgive you for not hearing it.
You forgive me for thinking of you all night,
and I'll forgive you for not treating me right.
You forgive me for waiting by the phone to answer your call,
and I'll forgive you for not calling at all.
You forgive me for giving you my heart,
and I'll forgive you for breaking it apart.
You forgive me for wanting to be with you,
and I'll forgive you for avoiding me.
Forgiveness brings inner peace,
so do we have a deal?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 23 January 2010

perfect..sweeet... well written and meaningful... the idea is as rich as it has expressed with a unique way... quite impressive is this poem...loved it 10/10

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Jake Shelvey 23 January 2010

Great poem, really well flowed and gr8 use of repetition

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Peter Strugnell 23 January 2010

i like the sentiments of this one it echoes a bit in my poem 'i'm a liar and your a fake', it is good to get these feelings out and done with

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g black black 22 January 2010

awww thas cute whoo

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Whispering Rose 22 January 2010

woww i love this one, although forgivness brings peace sometimes it's peaceful not to forgive everything and everyone

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Bernard Snyder 15 March 2011

Very nicely done Tanvi! I like the way you ended it! 'Do we have a deal'(lol)

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 13 March 2010

awesome. the poem ends with a bang. loved it. keep writing. wonderfully penned down. thank you very much.

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Braja K Sarkar 08 February 2010

Hi Tanvy, Thank you for sharing your poem.It is a nice poem indeed.I have enjoyed it

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 February 2010

very touching piece.straight from the heart.brilliant writing.lol.

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Dr.ram Mehta 23 January 2010

Yes, it's a beautiful poem with good expressions

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