Day And Night Poem by kanav justa
Day And Night
day and night the gravest foes
still none have seen them waging wars
leaves the day, oh the fading gleams
and the night comes with his shining stars
they share their time like sons their will
each day their crown, mutely they change
the day of his light, and of darkness gloats night
yet still dwells there a bond too strange
what if they were to coexist
the blackened rays and the daylight's spark
would their spring like humans be
the glittering face, and the heart dark
Wow creative analogy drawn btw human natures and day n night. Kudos poet! So nice to read u again kanav.
I like the idea of your poem, and the contrasts in the last stanza.
A highly imaginative piece of poetry. Insightful and well written. Thanks for sharing and keep it up.
You have beautifully juxtaposed two opposing facets of humans, a smiling face and a wicked heart and wonder if they exist as day and night - the arch enemies who stay in harmony without any open discord! This is a poem packed with meaning and full of poetic beauty! Welcome back Kanav!
A great flowing poem with much imagery.Meaningful parallel concerning day and night.A worthy piece of poetry
................they're beautiful kanav, they are BEST FRIENDS....they see each other every morning and every night :)
Great imagery, Kanav! Love how you have created this analogy between day and night and humans, very creative and imaginative! Keep on writing, I look forward to reading more of your poetry! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Great write your Day and Night. Please let me know when you post a new poem Kanav. I really admire your talent. Thank You
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Beautiful imagery write. you are a talented poet keep writing.