(anti-) Ageing! Poem by Shahzia Batool

(anti-) Ageing!

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A gentle soul once asked me here
to delete my Age and edit profile
I read it and just passed a smile
I do respect her but I ask:
What will happen if I do?
Where will go my achievements then?
Which are knit in the web of years?
The ones that I feel so proud on?
Experience of my daily use?
I just look back at mile-stones:
From cupboard love of childhood phase,
Tender touch of youthful age,
Somber glow of growing years;
A time there was when i was bright
Writing poems in moonlit nights,
I used to join my hands in faith,
Standing westward kept on praying
The sun used to sink
in the cups of my hands,
The fruits of prayers I earned a lot
Some I kept and some I lost;
Ageing, Friend! is not a loss,
Passing years are not a waste
Every age has a different taste!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
...and i wish to relish it...!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lasoaphia Quxazs 05 May 2013

Lovely words. There was time when I thought that I am getting older, and everything is late, but when I get to this 79, I can see that no years were wasted. Every second brought me some more wisdom, strength and more hope, without them I would not be what I am today. In the meantime I give my blessing to the good people, but to the bad also, because they all teach me for something important to go forward. So, nothing was wasted. You are right.

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Valsa George 03 May 2013

So sweet a poem! I am able to relish it so much as I have come to an age, people generally are afraid to disclose! But often I feel that we can age gracefully, though very rarely a sense of loss stomps in when I think of the agility of the limbs which I don't have now! But the mind never grows old! The closing line is just superb! Every age has a different taste! ! Enjoyed much! !

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Besa Dede 02 May 2013

Such wonderful and true verses! One should never be ashamed or deny Age! It's a part of us, just like every other aspect of our existence. I love the naturalism and the realism portrayed through this poem. You've done justice to the title! A beautiful write! Thank you for sharing. Regards, ~Besa

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Kavya . 03 May 2013

how true: Passing years are not a waste Every age has a different taste! ! ! a v nice one

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Paul Brookes 03 May 2013

Clever and bright age after all is just a number experience is a gift age to be cherished I reall enjoyed this Thanks for sharing

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Sarah Shahzad 14 January 2020

wow this one awesome..! wonderful piece, sharing like it.. :)

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Bharati Nayak 18 December 2018

Where will go my achievements then? Which are knit in the web of years? The ones that I feel so proud on? Experience of my daily use? I just look back at mile-stones: From cupboard love of childhood phase, Tender touch of youthful age, - - A lovely poem in praise of aging process..Yes, every age has its taste, old age is the age of wisdom.

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Bri Edwards 08 December 2016

been here, done this. i mean i've read and commented already!

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C. P. Sharma 06 June 2016

It flows like a lovely stream Sometimes sombre Sometimes gleam.

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Musawir Raakh 29 November 2015

Last worse is my fav, adding this poem to my fav list, a classic indeed, I invite you to read and rate mine,10

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Shahzia Batool

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