Apogee (Senryu) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Apogee (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


a putrid Apple
fermenting old desires—
end of allurement

Thursday, September 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: bible,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 09 October 2016

Indeed, end of allurement.....10++++

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Rajesh Thankappan 03 October 2016

Dawning of realization! The apple of allurement and desire rotting into something putrid is really pathetic.

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Hazel Durham 03 October 2016

Beginnings and endings life is about change, a change of emotions, change of lover etc. Great write!

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 September 2016

Old desires! ! Thanks for sharing.

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