April Washed. Poem by Fay Slimm

April Washed.

Rating: 5.0


March gone, I return April washed, ready
For writing once more, my exciting dreams
Needing a pen nudge me, with steady
Muse again daily, poetic scheming
Of verse is now a prime motive, romantic
New thoughts jostle for space as they line up
For lines. Gyrating inside pedanticly,
Metres emerge as desire becomes sated
And verses are birthed. So friends I appear
Among you again refreshed and rested,
Heart full of thanks for your care, I feel clear
And eager to write, - at least, trying my best.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I could feel your fresh and happy approach again to your love of words. Beautifully written and most happily received by me.

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Sameer Ahmed 09 April 2009

A very wonderful and unique way to greet everyone after a break.......We welcome you again and wish to see more of your magical work as time flows..... Regards Sameer

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Bonnie Collins 08 April 2009

Very nicely written with such a peacefull feel... Now if I could modivate myself to do this, .......

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Aarif Ameen 08 April 2009

nice work good luck

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Carl Harris 07 April 2009

Well, I am glad to hear you are rested and refreshed, Fay, as I came to your page this morning needing a little lift of my spirits and found it almost immediately with this charming poem! It's always a delight to read your sparkling poetry and this fine poem is no exception. It is, as all of your fine poems are, very expressive and well written. And now that your are back and churning out your marvellous writes, we all know that spring has at last come! Carl.

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Deva De Silva 16 April 2009

You sound ready indeed... Speaking my mind through your lines... always here to hear you speak through your keyboard!

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Robert Howard 11 April 2009

Your lovely poem touches close to home. I have been more or less pried away from writing poetry by work (a good thing) and bad politics associated with work (a decidedly bad thing.) I look forward to reading your new creations.

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Bob Blackwell 09 April 2009

Fay, glad your back, just keep on writing wonderful poetry like this one. It must be spring. Warm regards Bob 10/10

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Kevin Wells 09 April 2009

fay...you have such a wonderful following and all such talented writers, I hardly need to say 'welcome back' but...I say it anyway. Welcome back.

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Great to have you back. I am on the merry-go-round again of my favorite pastime. I have a couple of new poems. A Poet's Poetical Love is written for a poet here who calls me Grannie. It appears his Grannie died, so I would love to hear your comments. Thanks Fay love Karin Anderson

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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