As Coins Tinkled Poem by Valsa George

Money corrupts the weak minds and leads them to treacherous acts to acquire wealth by any means. There are many instances from history and mythology. These acts keep repeating. Beautifully presented in the poem as coins tinkled.

Truth hidden under a golden shine Human mind always support touch of solace, Love is really peaceful we want live a world gold of God live with us we want come together to live a peaceful world.....

M, am, you have come out pretty strong here. The poem is a river in rage. (10)

It is matter of sad. Such things are happening due to greed of wealth or money. Many have forgotten values of life and humanity. A thought provoking poem shared really. Wonderful drafting.

A powerful and beautiful poem with a meaningful message. The title and the recurring lines, As Coins Tinkled made the this poem powerful. Liked the way it was crafted too, it gives a great impact on the theme of corruption. Another brilliant write.10+++

As coins tinkle…… History repeats through eons; Treachery, Corruption And betrayal Replicated, Endless, Timeless, With masks donned! .......so touching and impressive. This is really a beautiful poem related to corruption. Thanks for sharing.10

we in the UNITED STATES OF AMERICA...........God Bless Her! ..................... know of no such coin tinkling! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! we use paper money, checks, electronic transfers and favors of whatever sort. WE ARE more advanced! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri :)

A Beautiful poem Valsa, that brought the facts of life which we are going through. Everything just for coins. Very true said in each lines, its a history and going to repeat itself. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. I wrote a similar poem especially on greed but didn't publish it.

The refrain As coins tinkle add to the merit of the wonderful poem that deals with treachery, corruption, betrayal which are endless and timeless in the history of mankind. Thank you for this beautiful write, Valsa.