As I Gaze Upon The World Poem by Shamin Bashir Shah
As I Gaze Upon The World
Whenever I see the world around me
I see the terrible sights around me
I see children working around me
I see people, starving to death around me
I see burnt houses around me
But I can't do anything to stop this around me
Most importantly I see people
Crying for peace around me
As I raise my voice for plea
Is there anyone to bring equality?
People are begging for tranquility
Lets leave all this far behind
What we need is peace of mind
Love for one and love for all
Peace to survive is today’s call.
Excellent, , well crafted written poem, , yes all what we need is peace for all nations, , again strong poem of strong feelings of struggle, , keep the good work up and go on :) rated 10++++
Superb...The context is well penned, your ideology and the build-up from 'As I raise my voice for plea' is Awe-inspiring! nicely Illustrated. 10/10!
An excellent ghazal like poem, i want to write ghazals too someday, hardhittin sadenin images here u hav portrayd! Such a wondrful poem. Pls coment my latest, a statue of lib poem.
love for one and love for all: -) universal msg...nice job
Oh very true...you explain what we need, , , thats all true..i like this poem...well done Shamin
i vote 4 dis poem truly the world we can change it not only true our words buh we need to prove this even through our works
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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