You gave me so much,
But I gave you nothing but pain.
You gave me the freedom I yearned,
But in return I bind you in chains.
You gave me the identity,
But I took that from you.
You gave me a place I could call home,
But I left you scared, deserted and alone.
Oh! I am so sorry Pakistan,
Forgive me for burning you alive.
Forgive me for letting you down,
Forgive me for all the times a finger was pointed at you.
Forgive me for being silent at times when I had to stand for up for you.
Forgive me for giving you the recognition of a terrorist country,
Forgive me for making you the charity box.
There is so much to say,
And so much to apologize for…..
If you cut my veins, I bleed Pakistan,
I ache when you ache, Pakistan,
I am because of you, Pakistan.
This is a great patriotic poem. As an Indian I can understand how passionate you are about your country! Its a good attempt to make awareness about the value of freedom. nice work.I loved it! especially these lines. .Forgive me for giving you the recognition of a terrorist country, If you cut my veins, I bleed Pakistan, I ache when you ache, Pakistan, very passionate!
Aha wah a great lyrical patriotic poem on pakstan. U wrote it so powerful. Hav been to pakstan as a child as many of my relativs r still there. Nice to read u again.
Great Tribute! An emotional and well penned write to honor your motherland! It is absolutely impressive and I am very sure that Pakistan is proud of you! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City
If pakistan can realy hear, it will surely be proud of you. I pray Almighty Allah make peace reign again in Pakistan. Good write.
I m sorry, I wanted to give 4 stars but it stuck on 1
Love of a country. outstanding
If pakistan can realy hear, it will surely be proud of you. I pray Almighty Allah make peace reign again in Pakistan. Good write..........gocash7.com
A thoughtful poem, we all should think.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Showing your patriotism/ a good poem! !