On a wrinkled piece of paper,
I lay in extreme centre.
I am depressed and wounded,
Yet nobody is astounded.
I lay there like a lifeless soul,
With no one to give me hope.
I have never been given a hug.
Always been treated like a slug.
On a wrinkled piece of paper,
I lay in extreme centre.
I have always gotten rude gestures,
From children, family, friends and teenagers.
Everyone greets me with a Bye-Bye,
And then tears prick my eyes.
I have always remained shackled,
My life, my death, my grave,
My soul, my body bound in reins.
On a wrinkled piece of paper,
I lay in extreme centre.
cooool u did a neat piece here... conveys the feelings amply well done u :) sat
wow there, nice poem but sad as its topic appriciated job, now too good kid Luwi
Thank you Sulaiman and Yoonoos for your comments. One is always glad to hear that there is someone who can find a meaning in one''s thoughts committed to paper, which, as we know, is patient. I am glad that you liked it. REGARDS, shamin
Hi Shamin, at your tender age, you've begun to make it on a big stage.Keep on writing my dear.You've loads of talents with you.
Thank you Sulaiman and Yoonoos for your comments. One is always glad to hear that there is someone who can find a meaning in one''s thoughts committed to paper, which, as we know, is patient. I am glad that you liked it.
Thank you Sulaiman and Yoonoos for your comments. One is always glad to hear that there is someone who can find a meaning in one''s thoughts committed to paper, which, as we know, is patient. I am glad that you liked it.....jobztip
this is great u re gud buh i guess u it nt real, nd jux a poem cux......
Wow! What an amazing perspective. Dark, yet a nice write. Congrats to you as being such a gifted person with many reasons to be proud. I'm not sure how long it would take to make your country realize how special you are, but continue to use the talents you're blessed with and control the things you can. Everything else will take care of itself! Stay positive Shamin and thanks for sharing!
Wo0o0o0w amaaaaaaaazing an awesome work, , very nice poem again :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
All i can say - On a wrinkled piece of paper, you've written a book... I hope you get my point; p