The Saddest Poem Ever... Poem by Shamin Bashir Shah

The Saddest Poem Ever...

Rating: 4.8


On a wrinkled piece of paper,

I lay in extreme centre.

I am depressed and wounded,

Yet nobody is astounded.

I lay there like a lifeless soul,

With no one to give me hope.

I have never been given a hug.

Always been treated like a slug.

On a wrinkled piece of paper,

I lay in extreme centre.

I have always gotten rude gestures,

From children, family, friends and teenagers.

Everyone greets me with a Bye-Bye,

And then tears prick my eyes.

I have always remained shackled,

My life, my death, my grave,

My soul, my body bound in reins.

On a wrinkled piece of paper,

I lay in extreme centre.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 08 July 2011

cooool u did a neat piece here... conveys the feelings amply well done u :) sat

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Aqeb Benazir 03 August 2011

All i can say - On a wrinkled piece of paper, you've written a book... I hope you get my point; p

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 August 2009

Hi Shamin, at your tender age, you've begun to make it on a big stage.Keep on writing my dear.You've loads of talents with you.

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Shamin Shah 15 August 2009

Thank you Sulaiman and Yoonoos for your comments. One is always glad to hear that there is someone who can find a meaning in one''s thoughts committed to paper, which, as we know, is patient. I am glad that you liked it. REGARDS, shamin

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Luwi Habte 15 August 2009

wow there, nice poem but sad as its topic appriciated job, now too good kid Luwi

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Haheke Haheke 27 August 2020

Thank you Sulaiman and Yoonoos for your comments. One is always glad to hear that there is someone who can find a meaning in one''s thoughts committed to paper, which, as we know, is patient. I am glad that you liked it.

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loveg 17 August 2020

Thank you Sulaiman and Yoonoos for your comments. One is always glad to hear that there is someone who can find a meaning in one''s thoughts committed to paper, which, as we know, is patient. I am glad that you liked it.....jobztip

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Duke Perry Abrokwa 10 October 2011

this is great u re gud buh i guess u it nt real, nd jux a poem cux......

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Bernard Snyder 07 August 2011

Wow! What an amazing perspective. Dark, yet a nice write. Congrats to you as being such a gifted person with many reasons to be proud. I'm not sure how long it would take to make your country realize how special you are, but continue to use the talents you're blessed with and control the things you can. Everything else will take care of itself! Stay positive Shamin and thanks for sharing!

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Abdallah Gamal 04 August 2011

Wo0o0o0w amaaaaaaaazing an awesome work, , very nice poem again :)

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