Shamin Bashir Shah

The Saddest Poem Ever...

On a wrinkled piece of paper,

I lay in extreme centre.

I am depressed and wounded,

Yet nobody is astounded.

I lay there like a lifeless soul,

With no one to give me hope.

I have never been given a hug.

Always been treated like a slug.

On a wrinkled piece of paper,

I lay in extreme centre.

I have always gotten rude gestures,

From children, family, friends and teenagers.

Everyone greets me with a Bye-Bye,

And then tears prick my eyes.

I have always remained shackled,

My life, my death, my grave,

My soul, my body bound in reins.

On a wrinkled piece of paper,

I lay in extreme centre.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 12, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, July 8, 2011

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  • Haheke Haheke (8/27/2020 10:38:00 PM)

    Thank you Sulaiman and Yoonoos for your comments.
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  • loveg (8/17/2020 4:56:00 AM)

    Thank you Sulaiman and Yoonoos for your comments.
    One is always glad to hear that there is someone who can find a meaning in one''s thoughts committed to paper, which, as we know, is patient. I am glad that you liked it.....jobztip

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  • Hafiz Qasim (12/30/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    I really like the way you coins the lines, marvelous construction of lines and deconstruction of thoughts.Awesome

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  • Hafiz Qasim (12/30/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    I really like the way you coins the lines, marvelous construction of lines and deconstruction of thoughts.Awesome

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  • Duke Perry AbrokwaDuke Perry Abrokwa (10/10/2011 7:45:00 AM)

    this is great u re gud buh i guess u it nt real, nd jux a poem cux......

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  • Bernard SnyderBernard Snyder (8/7/2011 12:48:00 AM)

    Wow! What an amazing perspective. Dark, yet a nice write. Congrats to you as being such a gifted person with many reasons to be proud. I'm not sure how long it would take to make your country realize how special you are, but continue to use the talents you're blessed with and control the things you can. Everything else will take care of itself! Stay positive Shamin and thanks for sharing!

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  • Abdallah GamalAbdallah Gamal (8/4/2011 6:11:00 AM)

    Wo0o0o0w amaaaaaaaazing an awesome work, , very nice poem again :)

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  • Aqeb BenazirAqeb Benazir (8/3/2011 7:02:00 PM)

    All i can say - On a wrinkled piece of paper, you've written a book...
    I hope you get my point; p

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (7/8/2011 2:49:00 AM)

    cooool
    u did a neat piece here...
    conveys the feelings amply

    well done u

    :)
    sat

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  • Luwi HabteLuwi Habte (8/15/2009 12:42:00 PM)

    wow there, nice poem but sad as its topic
    appriciated job, now too
    good kid
    Luwi

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  • Afzal Shauq (8/15/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    From children, family, friends and teenagers.

    Everyone greets me with a Bye-Bye,

    And then tears prick my eyes.

    this poem is written very emotionally and i can realize your innocent pain but I am sure being a poet you can heal up all the wounds with sweet words.. and one day you will become a well known poet with sweet ideas and thoughful themes as your start is very much impressive and intersting..meaningful work of yours..indeed.. well done..liked it..

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  • Shamin ShahShamin Shah (8/15/2009 4:36:00 AM)

    Thank you Sulaiman and Yoonoos for your comments.
    One is always glad to hear that there is someone who can find a meaning in one''s thoughts committed to paper, which, as we know, is patient. I am glad that you liked it.
    REGARDS,
    shamin

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/15/2009 12:33:00 AM)

    Hi Shamin, at your tender age, you've begun to make it on a big stage.Keep on writing my dear.You've loads of talents with you.

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