As Tear Prick My Eyes Poem by Shamin Bashir Shah

As Tear Prick My Eyes

Rating: 3.8


As tears prick my eyes,
I hold down my cries.
Things that I fear,
Have atlas come so near.
I wish he would care,
Of my love so pure and fair.
I hope he never dares,
To cheat with any other girl again.
I wish he would have cleared,
That we were no good pairs.
When I was not here,
With another girl he had an affair.
I wish I would never care.
As tears prick my eyes,
I hold down my cries……..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shamin Shah 15 August 2009

Thank you Sir Afzal for such nice and encouraging comments. May Allah bless you. Best Wishes for future shamin

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Luwi Habte 15 August 2009

well written sweet cutie nice peom Luwi

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Shamin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Sadiqullah Khan 16 August 2011

Very good, pure and simple.10

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Vanessa Hughes 06 August 2011

Don't hold back the tears, crying helps you heal. Hope you soon fall for someone who makes you happy! Enjoyed your poem. Nessy x

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Shamin Shah 04 August 2011

Thank you Abdallah..your comment cracked a smile on my face.: D

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Abdallah Gamal 04 August 2011

wo0o0o0ow what a lovely poem, , but I think it isn't a poem it's a fabulous song, , in my opinion u've to give it to Rihanna and it will break the all records :) nice poem, , rated 10++

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