As Mostly We All See Poem by Amitava Sur

As Mostly We All See

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For whom you are roving
For whom you moan,
Nobody will take your pain
Excepting you own.

Why are you shedding tears
For whom and for why,
None will wait for your end
Much before they will fly.

Time and tide wait for none
This life itself is so cruel.
It is like the leaves of the tree,
As mostly we all see.

The green leaves liven the tree
when they are green,
But unnoticing they fall and roll on dust
When they become grey.

Thus when you can
People will surround and extract you
But the moment you are undone
Mostly they all run away, deserting you.

This life itself is so cruel
As mostly we all see.
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Amitava (25.5.2014) 5-00 pm



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Sunday, May 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 21 February 2017

A fascinating poem containing much truth. Valsa said it best. Congrats on poem of the day!

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Roseann Shawiak 25 May 2014

Wow! Such a poignant poem, Amitava. Also so totally true to life as we all know it here on earth. Why indeed shedding and wasting tears for no one who stays in life, taking and giving nothing in return. You are a wise man, Amitava. Yes, life can be so cruel, yet we live it anyway until it's end. Thank you for your poem of wisdom, it's words do shine into my mind now. RoseAnn

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Tom Allport 21 February 2017

a very insightful poem of the way people's lives may unfold?

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 February 2017

Leaves of the tree.... congrats on being selected... Interesting poem! ! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 February 2017

Mostly as we see! ! Life itself is so cruel! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Christina Simmons 21 February 2017

You really have got it suss to a T. I can really resonate with your poem. Life is indeed a stage and sometimes we end up with a really difficult role. Congratulation! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 February 2017

Story of life from beginning to ending is same for all of us. As long as money speaks life is beautiful. Beautiful write for all of us. Congrats for the member poem of the day!

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Siddartha Montik 21 February 2017

EXPRESSIVE AND IMPRESSIVE! Why are you shedding tears For whom and for why, We are all alone in this world and AND leave ourselves someday! a TRUTH a TRUTH! Depth in words and TRUTH SIR! Thank you for sharing!

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Muzaffer Akin 21 February 2017

congratulations poet.

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Bharati Nayak 21 February 2017

The green leaves liven the tree when they are green, But unnoticing they fall and roll on dust When they become grey. Death is the cruel fact of life.We have to accept it. A good write, thanks for sharing.

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