This is dedicated to all Poemhunters weaving in the Loom of Love
We came so close - without actually touching,
Which is salutary for had we done so
We would have just imploded into one:
One New Astral Body - M I N D S O U L S P I R I T.
You were from outer space - FREE SPIRIT
I was from inner space - REASON LOGIC.
Spacewise - we were on a parallel course
We were never on a collision course.
I often ask myself - 'Just how close? '
'Just how close did we acctually come? '
A million miles? NO NO even closer
A thousand miles? TOO TOO close for comfort!
My heart antennae said - Fifty Thousand
WOW! Thats intercourse by astral standards!
So close that I could sense your sweet perfume
So close that I could taste your font of love.
So close that I could could feel your gravity
So close that I could feel your astral power
So close that one step closer was ECLIPSE
One sweet act of astral love - OBLIVION!
We came so close without actually touching
Which is salutary - for had we done so
We would have just imploded into one
One New Astral Body - M I N D S O U L S P I R I T
I touched a soul in your ASTRAL MYSTIC LOVE a great INTIMACY with a SPIRITUAL LOVE Thanks For Sharing 'Love Others And Love Will Come Back To You'
Poetic imagery at its best here John - - the loom with which poets weave is of the essence in the astral plane and you write into this piece all the implications of that - a strong and very emotive read - - thank you - - Fay
The best gift, other than our Muse, is the cyber power of Astral love John! You describe poetic power her too I assume? The combination are unbeatable imo. Sweet topic write. smiling at you Tai
tells of many aspects of friendship n love
intercourse by astral standards-lol..love that! ! I have felt this kind of closeness and I could NOT have described it so well! ! This is a wonderful write! ! 10 :)
Spiritual love does indeed transcend all barriers of time, or distance. Romance is alive and well in this compelling piece. Beautiful, John. As always, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice poem and a very special kind of love...too different from the normal sense.