Nosheen Irfan

Gold Star - 54,855 Points (Lahore, Pakistan)

At Nightfall - Poem by Nosheen Irfan

When the day is done
and a silver moon rises
on the crest of heaven
full, self-assured and bright
in the midst of envious stars
that shine with all their might,
a dream wakes in me
of love, more resplendent
than the sky I behold.

Nosheen Irfan © 2016

Topic(s) of this poem: dreams, nature, night

Comments about At Nightfall by Nosheen Irfan

  • Seamus O' Brian (12/3/2016 6:23:00 PM)

    This is perfect, Nosheen. How resplendent indeed the heavens, and how powerfully beautiful within us the wonder of love. Your writing here is so precisely complete. You capture the magnitude of such a topic with such efficiency. Bravo, my good poet! (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (7/21/2016 1:10:00 AM)

    This is so lovely..... Nosheen! A perfect blend of beauty and imagination! (Report) Reply

    Nosheen Irfan (7/21/2016 1:47:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Valsa. Good to see you back.

  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/19/2016 3:22:00 AM)

    A dream wakes in me of love; with the muse of peace and joy! Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (7/19/2016 12:12:00 AM)

    A very inspiring write of immense beauty! (Report) Reply

    Nosheen Irfan (7/19/2016 2:03:00 AM)

    Thank you so much sir for your appreciation.

  • (7/18/2016 9:14:00 AM)

    Hi Nosheen
    I take moon here, as a metaphor for for a lover visiting his lover at nightfall. All made up and handsomely attired to impress his love. He is in 'cloud nine' as he knows that his love is waiting. And confident too! All his friends are envious, naturally.
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    Nosheen Irfan (7/19/2016 1:51:00 AM)

    Wowww. Lovely comment. I like your interpretation.

  • Kelly Kurt (7/17/2016 12:56:00 PM)

    The night sky is my dream, my lover. I don't want to make her jealous by dreaming of mortals.: -) (Report) Reply

    Nosheen Irfan (7/18/2016 6:17:00 AM)

    Hahaha. I also love night sky. It is a huge inspiration for me. Thank you Kelly for witty remark.

  • Edmund Strolis (7/17/2016 11:34:00 AM)

    Hard to imagine that the dream of dreams would ever be put to rest, to sleep even a fitful sleep. So close to the surface always at the very least a whisper in the air. I love the lunar majesty. The optical illusion of stars impossibly bright paling the silver moon. Jealous stars indeed. To link this heavenly scene, the physical, the spiritual in such a seamless and bitter-sweet manner leaves only the echo of an ache.......superb 10 (Report) Reply

    Nosheen Irfan (7/18/2016 6:16:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Edmund for a brilliant review. Greatly pleased and obliged.

  • Barry Middleton (7/17/2016 7:17:00 AM)

    This poem is perfect. The imagery is beautiful. I particularly like the envious stars. A 10 for sure! (Report) Reply

    Nosheen Irfan (7/17/2016 9:32:00 AM)

    Thank u Barry. I'm glad u like it. Regards.

  • Robert Murray Smith (7/17/2016 4:57:00 AM)

    Very nice. Thank you. (Report) Reply

    Nosheen Irfan (7/17/2016 9:28:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Robert.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 17, 2016

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