On a patch of soiled Earth
As I stood feeling rather glum
With eyes poised on the horizon far
I saw an assemblage of colors
Arching across the moist sky
It had drizzled half an hour before
And here and there were tiny droplets
On the serrated edges of rain washed leaves
Quivering and trembling
And precariously balancing
Lest they would fall and break
In that pastel evening shine
How they sparkled like diamonds on a crown!
My eyes feasted on the delicious mix of shades
As the celestial bow stood a crescent overhead
All things living and lifeless
Have joyfully shared its hues and shade
And the Earth turned into an exquisite canvas of art
Giving very many eyes a splendid treat
Enchanting poem Valsa, some really lovely descriptive lines, and creates a very atmospheric read. Well done.
As said before your poems on Nature are not merely poems but outstanding creations of beautiful Nature and putting them lively before us........Valsa.....and this is amazing......a sure 10/10
You've painted a beautiful picture here of the rainbow with its hues. And as a spectator, I've enjoyed the delightful excursion. And you certainly did find a pot of joy there. A wonderful job Valsa. Thank you.
Nothing more beautiful than a rainbow and you have nailed it so perfectly and more so and its the the last lines that make you read it again...regards
A fantastic expression has been made on rainbow and its different color incisively. I quote....... When God willfully spilled a drop of Indigo Into the vast stretch of waters below It turned into hazy blue And upon its glassy surface, The sky is mirrored in azure hue Beautiful poem.10
I have added this amazing work of art to my poem list!
Wow! Wow! Wonderful is this amazing work of art! Excellently expressed my friend!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
poem of the day what a great write losing mind feeling unconsious having complex do u really exist how do you bear the burden of so much talent?