At The Glimpse Of A Rainbow Poem by Valsa George

At The Glimpse Of A Rainbow

Rating: 4.9


On a patch of soiled Earth
As I stood feeling rather glum
With eyes poised on the horizon far
I saw an assemblage of colors
Arching across the moist sky

It had drizzled half an hour before
And here and there were tiny droplets
On the serrated edges of rain washed leaves
Quivering and trembling
And precariously balancing
Lest they would fall and break

In that pastel evening shine
How they sparkled like diamonds on a crown!

My eyes feasted on the delicious mix of shades
As the celestial bow stood a crescent overhead
All things living and lifeless
Have joyfully shared its hues and shade
And the Earth turned into an exquisite canvas of art
Giving very many eyes a splendid treat

Monday, May 20, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 20 May 2013

poem of the day what a great write losing mind feeling unconsious having complex do u really exist how do you bear the burden of so much talent?

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Valerie Dohren 20 May 2013

Enchanting poem Valsa, some really lovely descriptive lines, and creates a very atmospheric read. Well done.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 September 2014

As said before your poems on Nature are not merely poems but outstanding creations of beautiful Nature and putting them lively before us........Valsa.....and this is amazing......a sure 10/10

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Walterrean Salley 10 July 2013

You've painted a beautiful picture here of the rainbow with its hues. And as a spectator, I've enjoyed the delightful excursion. And you certainly did find a pot of joy there. A wonderful job Valsa. Thank you.

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Ken E Hall 29 May 2013

Nothing more beautiful than a rainbow and you have nailed it so perfectly and more so and its the the last lines that make you read it again...regards

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 August 2018

A fantastic expression has been made on rainbow and its different color incisively. I quote....... When God willfully spilled a drop of Indigo Into the vast stretch of waters below It turned into hazy blue And upon its glassy surface, The sky is mirrored in azure hue Beautiful poem.10

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I have added this amazing work of art to my poem list!

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Wow! Wow! Wonderful is this amazing work of art! Excellently expressed my friend!

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Seema Chowdhury 07 April 2016

Very Creative and a a beautiful write

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Akhtar Jawad 17 September 2015

A nice painting.....................................10

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