heart beacons as finds its bliss
by gleams of delight when splash
and croons like flow of ripples
by sweet breeze in summer.
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THIS IS POETRY! ! ! ! ! ! hats off to you for your wonderful poem.
Fantablous poem absloutely great composition of words and after reading it places u in a diff world nice one
'spumes of blue spruces up hill by the subtlety of reverence, '- Awesome lines i cherished the hidden travel
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
excellent writing accompanied by a brilliant flor flawless is the word sir.. 10++++++ regards prashant
Excellent poem. Well penned. Meaningful creation. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+
This is a really powerful poem ^_^ thanks for recommending it.. Hope you could read 'Standing By the Shore' if you have time also ^_^
Excellent write as always from you Dr, hope you are now fully recovered from your accident 10 Lynda xx
nice poem..need not to say this is a poem that ''croons like flow of ripple'' comes as melodious voice
Sure it is.. always the thrive of hope rides the man forward.. very positive approach with very powerful works regards sandhya
I Put This, in my Fav's... Very Good Poem... I Like The Topic, The lovely-flow and beautifully passionate wording... Each Stanza was superb... MoonBee
Hi Dr Kar audacity of hope was a real hope poem keep up the good expression we poets all benefit from each others expression expression in life is the key to happiness Regards Rehana yakoob Read my latest poem The way you think and kindly comment
A brilliant title using a phrase that is bold and outrageous. The poem that follows is bright and explosively positive - definitely a major key - (might I suggest D major, the key of joy) . Excellent write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
You took us to the center of your poem with your poetic words then showed us the beauty of your surroundings. A very good write. A 10 Your friend Lynn
very well written and nicely done poem. again the imagery is fantastic and the message clear. Excellent.
Great poem! ! Beautiful, yet simple...it paints a picture with words!
I agree with ' Pradnya P' below...this is poetry at its best! 'Adacity of Hope'is when heart beacons as find bliss by gleans of delight when splash and croons like flow of ripples by sweet breeze in summer Now, this is the adacity of hope! A 10++++