Aurat Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Miserable conditions of a wife is painted in this poem deeply. A heart touching poem shared nicely. - - - 10

Hats off! Even a woman could not have said it better.1000 bhi kam he iske liye.

Aurat ki gatha kitni sundarta Se bayan ki

समाज में औरत की अवस्था व स्थिति के बारे में हमारी दुरंगी सोच पर आपने अपने सधे हुए विचार इस कविता में दर्ज किये हैं. इनमे जितनी ख़ुशी है उतना ही दर्द भी है. इस अर्थपूर्ण कविता के लिए मैं आपको हार्दिक धन्यवाद देता हूँ, मित्र.

Na jaane kyun aysa lagta hai jaise aapne sabhi auraton ki kahani keh di. Bahut khoob.

A tremendous sharing....wonderful....really speechless......thank you for sharing sir :)

Teri upaj tak cheen li apna naam de diya Khud toh hasta rakha aur tujh ko rota chod diya. It's a mans world and to survive is to polish the skills of being brave and fearless but the society cannot digest this side of a woman, she is banned as ruthless and insensitive. She don't has the right to voice. Suppressed to the core she ends up being a martyr. But is it worth the sacrifice? your poem reflects the atrocities faced by a woman. Applaud for writing on such sensitive issue.10++++++

A very poignant and brave poem Asim. It is tough to be a woman in a man's world, and you described the hardships with perfection. Thanks for sharing.

Speechless. What a poem! That's a real writer who negates his own self and enters into another person. Certainly a master of feelings you are. Definitely 10 many many times.