Autumn Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Autumn

Rating: 4.9

The prevailing wind teases
And circles the trees
The multicolor leaves
Fall ever so gently and sway
Like low flying butterflies
Brown, red, yellow
Orange and purple
Against the dark brown soil.


Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 08 November 2023

I give **** four stars. The leaves also clutter up our long, sloped, winding driveway to the highway as well, but they ARE nice to look at. : ) bri

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Anjandev Roy 31 October 2023

Love to read it time and again.....

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Indira Renganathan 18 October 2023

Natures nice combination of colours is interestingly written...liked

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Rebecca Navarre 03 October 2023

You have captured so beautifully the magnificent feeling of autumn! .. Endless 10'S And Endless Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 03 October 2023

Oh, So Wonderful painted like a beautifully sweet dream! .. Awesome! ..

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2024

To my favourite with top marks

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2024

Dear friend Rose, this poem is delight both to the eyes to visualise and to the heart. Loved the colourful leaves.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2024

A fascinating account of the leaves in varied colours - brown, red, yellow, orange, purple, fluttering like butterflies in the breeze.

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Aufie Zophy 06 January 2024

Very well written; the reader sees the beauty in his mind while reading these verses.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 November 2023

Excellent poem. Thanks for posting.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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