We are in the autumn of our lives
And watching it I wonder
Who will perish first?
You lay yr head on my stomach
Meditiating with the rhythem of my breath
You close yr eyes for the day is ending
But I stand guard for the grim reaper
Because I'd rather have me to be first
Autumn of our lives; / Gooseberry leaves- descending/ by the cold wind blow! a very beautiful and romantic poem being shared with dear poet....5* from me.... stay safe.
Talking of love, may I invite all of you to read my poem series, "A Home For Daphne ". Thank you. I will post the concluding part soon.
So lovely a poem. Very emotive expression, but emanating from the bottom of your heart, so gripping the heart of the reader. Loved it.5 *s and myfav
4. Maybe her dependence on me is waning too. I know I am being a little selfish when I wish I should die before her, I would love her to live a happy healthy independent life without me.
Intriguing song of love, enduring through the watches of the night, a light in the dark... Beautiful.
Beautiful expressed thoughts on life, death, and love! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
Dear LeeAnn, relax. You are only in Summer. People like me and Robert Murray Smith are in the Autumn or even Winter of our lives. Great poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Till we are alive let us live life fully and enjoy writing good poems like this one. Nice expression.5*****