Autumn Of Our Lives Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Autumn Of Our Lives

Rating: 4.7


We are in the autumn of our lives
And watching it I wonder
Who will perish first?
You lay yr head on my stomach
Meditiating with the rhythem of my breath
You close yr eyes for the day is ending
But I stand guard for the grim reaper
Because I'd rather have me to be first

Saturday, March 19, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. M. Asim Nehal 20 March 2022

Till we are alive let us live life fully and enjoy writing good poems like this one. Nice expression.5*****

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Pallab Chaudhury 20 March 2022

Autumn of our lives; / Gooseberry leaves- descending/ by the cold wind blow! a very beautiful and romantic poem being shared with dear poet....5* from me.... stay safe.

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 March 2022

Talking of love, may I invite all of you to read my poem series, "A Home For Daphne ". Thank you. I will post the concluding part soon.

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 March 2022

So lovely a poem. Very emotive expression, but emanating from the bottom of your heart, so gripping the heart of the reader. Loved it.5 *s and myfav

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 March 2022

4. Maybe her dependence on me is waning too. I know I am being a little selfish when I wish I should die before her, I would love her to live a happy healthy independent life without me.

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Anjandev Roy 28 October 2022

Justly marvelous......thank u, dear poetess...

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Smoky Hoss 27 March 2022

Intriguing song of love, enduring through the watches of the night, a light in the dark... Beautiful.

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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2022

Beautiful expressed thoughts on life, death, and love! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Cowboy Ron Williams 21 March 2022

Dear LeeAnn, relax. You are only in Summer. People like me and Robert Murray Smith are in the Autumn or even Winter of our lives. Great poem!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 20 March 2022

Romantic and elegantly written.5 stars.

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