Autumn, Then And Now' Poem by Bharati Nayak

Autumn, Then And Now'

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Autumn, Then and Now'



I remember,


Sleeping under a starry sky,

A small cloud was floating by,

Moon was playing hide and seek,

With my parents and siblings,

I was catching moonbeams.


How time moves on,

Autumn turns to winter so fast,

A little girl in flowery frock,

Is in her autumn now,

And her child,

Who was playing pumpkin on her back

Has flown to a different land,

Does Autumn look same there?

Tuesday, November 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,life,seasons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susheela Shiju 13 November 2018

beautifully penned dear Bharati...10

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Bharati Nayak 13 November 2018

Thank you Susheela Shiju for your appreciation.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2018

Sleeping under starry sky you can gain many more experiences. Starry sky gives us beautiful feelings. You have drawn an excellent imagery in this poem. Autumn turns into winter and this fast process is witnessed. An excellent natural poem is very well penned.10

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Bharati Nayak 18 November 2018

Thank you so much, Sir, for your insightful comment.Yes, life is a fast process.When we look back we wonder how fast time has gone.

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C F 14 March 2019

A thoughtful poem on the cycle of life, nostalgic with a hint of sadness for a child who has now gone out into the world. Very well expressed!

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

How seasons change and how life itself, a beautiful parallel is drawn between the two, and feelingly said.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 January 2019

I remember! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 November 2018

very nice autumn you have here but IN CANADA USA AND UK where it snows so much autumn has a different glow come we to u will show

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A reminiscence so beautifully and touchingly portrayed.A little girl in flowery frock....... ..... Is in her autumnnow,

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Bharati Nayak 18 November 2018

I am humbled by your encouraging words.Thank you so much Parameswar Nair Damodaran Nairji.

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