Autumn, Then and Now'
I remember,
Sleeping under a starry sky,
A small cloud was floating by,
Moon was playing hide and seek,
With my parents and siblings,
I was catching moonbeams.
How time moves on,
Autumn turns to winter so fast,
A little girl in flowery frock,
Is in her autumn now,
And her child,
Who was playing pumpkin on her back
Has flown to a different land,
Does Autumn look same there?
Sleeping under starry sky you can gain many more experiences. Starry sky gives us beautiful feelings. You have drawn an excellent imagery in this poem. Autumn turns into winter and this fast process is witnessed. An excellent natural poem is very well penned.10
Thank you so much, Sir, for your insightful comment.Yes, life is a fast process.When we look back we wonder how fast time has gone.
A thoughtful poem on the cycle of life, nostalgic with a hint of sadness for a child who has now gone out into the world. Very well expressed!
How seasons change and how life itself, a beautiful parallel is drawn between the two, and feelingly said.
very nice autumn you have here but IN CANADA USA AND UK where it snows so much autumn has a different glow come we to u will show
A reminiscence so beautifully and touchingly portrayed.A little girl in flowery frock....... ..... Is in her autumnnow,
I am humbled by your encouraging words.Thank you so much Parameswar Nair Damodaran Nairji.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautifully penned dear Bharati...10
Thank you Susheela Shiju for your appreciation.