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Sunday, August 2, 2015

Balancing

Rating: 4.8
I have come
Yet I have not come
I may not come any day
When I have come
I have filled you
With love
If I have not come
I have left
Some spaces vacant
With some promises
To fill
The promises
May not be filled
Any day
As I may not come
As my fate
Hangs in balance
Between love and void.
Bharati Nayak
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Some abstract thoughts arise sometimes
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COMMENTS
Nice poem on love and promise.....10
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Howard Simon 24 March 2018
Beautiful
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Bichitra Anand 01 March 2018
Oh! What a wonderful thought? As my fate hang in balance.....void.I love this.
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Edward Kofi Louis 23 October 2016
True love! Love and dreams. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Queeny Gona 24 August 2015
In-decisive hearts outcry for the love is beautifully penned in poetic lines dear mam!
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Queeny Gona 24 August 2015
In-decisive hearts out cry is beautifully penned in poetic lines dear Mam!
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Valsa George 09 August 2015
The oscillation of a heart between decision and indecision......unable to decide if he/she is in real love or not! This dilemma is powerfully presented!
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The intensity of love and its absence is well put.Thank you.
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 08 August 2015
Coming and filling with love expresses deep emotion in each line of this poem. Still many promises are there to fill new promises., Mind awakes with strength with wonderful vision and nice presentation. Really very interesting poem.
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Pranab K Chakraborty 07 August 2015
Beautiful craft of expressing poetic oscillation. Good indeed. Thanks.
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Pranab K Chakraborty 07 August 2015
Beautiful craft of expressing poetic oscillation. Good indeed. Thanks.
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