Baby Tell Me You Love Me Poem by Asif Andalib

Beautiful poem with great rhythm and flow, great write!

Ah wow fab sweet poem one of yor best indeed! My votes go to it. Cment on my newest pls.

Simple and straight. I love the repetition and the use of similes. Thanks for sharing.

Cute, simple, but still able to evoke emotion. A pleasure to read. My favorite line is Baby tell me you need me like a river needs a sea. The next thought in my head was to flow into. The thought of someone needing you to flow into is very tender & denotes warm affection. I also like how this poem builds upon itself with like, love, need, want, miss. The natural progression of emotions s highlighted well. Thanks for sharing.

Hi Asif sir, You write really well. congrats for being in top 500 poets. keep it up.

I like the way the lines rhyme...

D rhymes are lovelym and so are the lines. They form a rhythm in one's head like a song does. Well done.

I really like it ^.^ nice job!

Cool one. good rythym and flow.

Great write... I liked ur comparisons and the flow indeed.... Lovely! ! !