Baby tell me you like me
Like a poet likes poetry
Baby tell me you love me
Like a flower loves a bee
Baby tell me you need me
Like a river needs a sea
Baby tell me you want me
Like a monkey wants a tree
Baby tell me you miss me
Like a sad heart misses glee
beautiful ink.flow, rhyming and concept is nice.liked it.
Hi Asif sir, You write really well. congrats for being in top 500 poets. keep it up.
Cute, simple, but still able to evoke emotion. A pleasure to read. My favorite line is Baby tell me you need me like a river needs a sea. The next thought in my head was to flow into. The thought of someone needing you to flow into is very tender & denotes warm affection. I also like how this poem builds upon itself with like, love, need, want, miss. The natural progression of emotions s highlighted well. Thanks for sharing.
Simple and straight. I love the repetition and the use of similes. Thanks for sharing.
D rhymes are lovelym and so are the lines. They form a rhythm in one's head like a song does. Well done.
Great write... I liked ur comparisons and the flow indeed.... Lovely! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
it sounds simple but nice!