Balance Between Expectations And Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Balance Between Expectations And Life

Rating: 5.0


A gentle touch
A sunny smile
And a light hug
Is what we all expect
From the beloved
And our expectations
Have no limitations
As we keep them getting
Finally, unless we realize
Those have become routine
And demand and supply
Has equilibrium with love missing
The threshold in our relationship
Is the level of the expectations,
We keep a balance between
The love life and work life.
The touch evaporates
The smile turned to showing teethes
And the hug becomes a tug of war
And we slowly apart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 07 January 2016

Over expectations are always dangerous..Well written Asimji

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Kelly Kurt 07 January 2016

Expectations can sometimes influence outcomes.

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Suman Kumari 28 July 2020

Yes slightly differ everything reverse

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T Rajan Evol 28 July 2020

Yes this is perfect way to handle the life.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

Demand and supply! With the muse of life. Nice work.

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Nosheen Irfan 08 January 2016

Wowww. What a true picture of life! That's something everyone can relate to. And of course the theme is beautifully presented. A gentle touch...a sunny smile..a light hug...Very catchy start of the poem.10 again.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2016

Sunny smile and light hug balance life wonderfully with imagery expressed here in neat mind. Fantastic sharing done definitely.10

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