Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie - 6 Points (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

Ballade D'Amour - Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

(dedicated to Mr. Krystian Zimerman, a great pianist)

a rich ethnographic
a vaulted ceiling
ornate windows
carved glasses

colorful lace
floral patterns
folk embroidery
priceless codices

lyrical and dramatic
narrative qualities

wh ite stones
wooden benches
decorated frescoes
an exquisite mansion

a chateau in your heart
soaring longing voice
conquer the anger
no more sadness

a love come true
hillside vineyards
melodious memories
excellent wines for lovers

(inspired by Pierre-Auguste Renoir's In the Garden)

Comments about Ballade D'Amour by Ahmad Shiddiqi

  • (11/5/2009 11:05:00 AM)

    Beautiful, well penned and painted so meticulously.10 (Report) Reply

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  • (1/22/2009 10:26:00 AM)

    Let us hope we al live to see a love come true!

    Thanksgreetings from Sneek

    The Boomfriend
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  • Indira Renganathan (1/18/2009 1:32:00 AM)

    Last two stanzas correctly describe the beauty of your verses and the playing of the pianist...congratulations for your overwhelming appreciation...great (Report) Reply

  • (1/17/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    a ballad of love, a song from the heart, a poem written to celebrate the greatest of one in the art of music, in concerto...

    a chateau in your heart
    soaring longing voice---beautiful words to describe and paint the pianist magic to your wonderful life....10
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  • Fay Slimm (1/17/2009 12:06:00 AM)

    Your descriptive images are second to none Ahmad and the inspirational words conjour the muic from ether for me.......... thank you......Fay.. (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2009 8:01:00 PM)

    A journey into our hearts/minds, yes, you have that special gift to delight and educate us. This time, Ahmad, I went on a luxurious vacation and enjoyed the scenic wonders surrounding the elegant estate. What a picture you painted! Living in wine country as I do, here in Sonoma and Napa Counties, north of San Francisco, I may have had a mental and emotional advantage. I truly connected with the images you so brilliantly created. Carol (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/14/2009 8:55:00 PM)

    Bursting with beauty. (Report) Reply

  • (1/10/2009 11:15:00 AM)

    I like the beautiful words usage in this poem! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (1/9/2009 6:37:00 PM)

    The words flow like musical notes. (Report) Reply

  • (1/9/2009 3:03:00 PM)

    Opulence in the highest tradition. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/9/2009 6:18:00 AM)

    Musicians can relate. I like this simple work... Pretty amazing. (Report) Reply

  • (1/9/2009 6:12:00 AM)

    Well written tribute.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, January 9, 2009

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