Battle Through The Tides Poem by Lyn Paul
Battle Through The Tides
Does anybody really care
Just How I truly feel
Cut up so deeply, I feel the world has just stood stll
Why has no one asked?
Does no one even care?
The coldness from you all, is very hard to bare
You all take a step back, it's a little hard to take
It's on my mind daily, the moment I awake
You look at me so different. Who would ever know?
A relationship once had, that could only ever grow
Nothing I can do
Can repair what once was
Nothing I can do
Just never! Just because!
Any pain caused, remember there are two sides
How great it would be
To Battle through the Tides
But nothing I can do
To release what may be wrong
Does anyone care, How I am coming along?
Care... Care... Care... Is all that I have shown
Yet now I feel... That I am all alone
So Nothing I can do
To change, Just how I feel
The Hurt and the sadness, they are there,
They are REAL
Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL
Your pain is expressed in such a manner as you can't bear it but you have to.This is the tragedy of commoners. Very beautifully and casually accepted.Bravo!
Very much heart felt, it reveals the beautiful heart you have in you thinking for others and always feel to help other. So nice of you Lyn, love you. Thanks for your caring heart.
... sometimes love is not enough for the person... I like the note you have written.. ~ two sides.. two hearts only one hurting~ That makes it even worse.... wonderful write...
This is a very powerful poem and it reveals the ignorance of a lot of people. The absence of empathy and kindness.
The real hurt and real sadness in your poem have the flavour of Keats' Endymion: To Sorrow I bade good morrow, And thought to leave her far away behind; But cheerly, cheerly, She loves me dearly; She is so constant to me, and so kind: I would deceive her And so leave her, But ah! she is so constant and so kind.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 6:11:27 AM # 1.0.0
Feel the poem with it struggle in the battle....Its hard to let Black to meet White, just find a similarity and fuse the identity to know, may Grey will be a junction of two side..._Soul