Bay Song Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Bay Song

Rating: 5.0


(dedicated to Ms. Hélène Grimaud, a great pianist)

meandering
reflection
blue sea
far away ships

smooth sky
calm light
dream-like
panorama

shades of
lush and longing
patchwork of
colors and joy

moments of
relaxation
deep feeling
immortal

live forever
in twisting shore
sail nowhere
elements of lover

from now on
I'm searching for you
O beloved friend!
are you waiting for me?

(inspired by Eugène Boudin's Bay of Plougastel)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 10 January 2009

Beautiful, can I help you search.

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 10 January 2009

Beautifully written I like it!

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Little Morning Star 11 January 2009

beautiful poem.. hope you can find your beloved friend soon..

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Lynda Robson 12 January 2009

A lovely flow to this one Ahmad, you paint a lovely picture with your pen, 10 Lynda xx

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Gargi Saha 13 January 2009

A Wonderful poem. u get 10++++++++..........

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Juan Carlos Abeti 23 May 2009

well written beautiful description just like to be there

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Merna Ibrahim 22 May 2009

well written...your love to your friend is too obvious...thanks

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Sonya Florentino 21 May 2009

a beautiful panorama of the sea...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 May 2009

This shows you high sense of imagination to bring such nice poems.

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Christina Phan 21 May 2009

this is sad n make me want to cry great one its was fanastics n such inspiriations well done 10.5+

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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