Beach Poem by shiny shine
Beach
As I walk along the deserted beach
I feel the damp sand surronding my feet
I feel the cool relaxing breeze creep up upon me with ease
As I look out at the restless waves my thoughts unwind like restless days
The beach is a very quiet and calming place
Solitude and introspection going side by side...do read my Flowers of Love and When i Think about you which has the similar impact.10 voted for you
true it is a moving and rhythimic place roaring load yet it gives peace we feel one with it...lovely short poem
There is a hint of ONOMATOPOEIA in your verse. 'The sand surrounding my feet' begs the lines 'and creeping up through my toes.' Creep, however, doesn't work with breeze and ease. Also 'surrounding' is misspelled. Nice effort though, for a girl of 17. ~Cat
I like the way you wrote the poem.One thought continuously perceiving the other thoughts aroused.Comparing the continuous flow of thoughts with continuous fluctuations and variations of sea water.Nice poem
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 11:02:20 PM # 1.0.0
Very calm and serene. Inspiring tranquility.