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When a bud became a rose,
vigorous dreams flooded the heart glee
dumbness flashed on the pensive mood -
quaking mind is the nucleus of dragging love
ocean of emotions catalyzed the kinky close
deep aches popped the heart and stone
render conceived,
the glimmer chords splashed
utmost inflames grew to outburst,
bursts into the fire of gaiety -
psyche poured the fathomless
passions till death
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@Musfiq us shaleheen,28th November,2012
One can thing of the strength of this poem after reading it. The words sound very strong like the message of the poem. Most words are used metaphorically and that makes it interesting for the readers. Very Matured.
awesome.. nice proses and flowing lines and wonderful words, used in this marvelous poem. muchas gracias for sharing~nb
very enthusiastic. I admit it caught me by suprise. a nice suprise.
Very strong images are being expressed here, forming deep thought in life. Thanks for sharing.
A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
A beautiful poem. 'quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, ' Loved this line.
quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, In 7 years you write of the mystery that fear blocks love. the glimmer becoming the fire is also very beautiful. Allah has given you your pen.
Hmmm...i can tell its alot going on in this poem, maybe a little too much going on in this poem, but i love the power and beauty in your choice of words. Very nice :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
like an abstract piece of art the picture z pregnant with so many ideas, different shades and strokes enhance its beauty....... full of meaning and widen perception......... like to read this matured piece of art