Below Stairs Poem by Mary Spain

Below Stairs

Rating: 4.9


At times it feels as though I'm trapped below
The slatted floor of heaven. Fleetingly,
I glimpse an angel's foot, or what might be
The shadow of a trailing wing, and know
There's something overhead. And yet, although
I'd love to join their distant company,
The dust and darkness of captivity
Enfeeble ears and eyes and overthrow
The will. Unaided, I can't penetrate
Their realm. But, neither can I comprehend
The puzzling clues which seem to indicate
That loving angels constantly descend
To join me in my cramped and dusty state,
And light the stairs that lead to journey's end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Impressively written... fantastic form.

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Kevin Wells 04 March 2009

Another wonderful piece of writing that I find really touching. I think a person of creativity knows instinctively that there is something 'up there/out there' somewhere but we don't quite know what or where it is. You have encapsulated the feeling we all share. Brilliant!

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Christos Rodoulla Tsiailis 19 January 2009

you seem to have afixed as formula of writing, one that determines many things and clues in your writings. I love it!

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Reshma Ramesh 09 October 2008

hey this so touching.....nice

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

A wonderful composition. Love it.

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Khairul Ahsan 18 July 2013

That loving angels constantly descend To join me in my cramped and dusty state, And light the stairs that lead to journey's end. What a beautiful expression!

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Narie Milton 26 January 2010

this poem was so beautiful

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Keerthana Dinesh 1998 12 September 2009

you have done a very good poem...it`s fantastic...

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Amy Curran 15 August 2009

That Was A Very Well Written Poem Mary! ! A True Enigma :)

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Catrina Heart 11 August 2009

Marvelous composition here my friend...10+++

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