Betrayal Poem by londiwe buthelezi


Rating: 4.9

you can betray someone
not by what you
have done,
but what you long
to do...


oh that is a true words for a sincere one..excellent thoughts

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anurag duggal 14 April 2009

you have killed me with these lines i wish i cud write something like thisssss

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

u speak so vividly and truthfully.. u are amazing and amazing write =)

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~ Jon London ~ 15 April 2009

Simple sharp lines that speak volumes of true meaning. Nice write

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Kurt Behle 15 April 2009

What else can he say Great write! ! !

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Indira Babbellapati 25 April 2009

makes me ponder...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Zoleka Lusiti 24 April 2009

Nice and short, leaves you with food for your brain and heart. Keep it up!

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 April 2009

Talk about motive and intention... Just to bare your imagination to people is something to think about.... Cheers. Subroto

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Tylor Cooks 21 April 2009

this poem makes u think of what betrayal could be or the many different types of betrayl good poem

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sky dreams 21 April 2009

this is a great expression! .. you don't have to do an action to betray someone, all's you have to do is think it.. great job!

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londiwe buthelezi

londiwe buthelezi

empangeni, south africa
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