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Rating: 4.9

you can betray someone
not by what you
have done,
but what you long
to do...

Kefentse Sathekge 20 April 2009

a great proverb :) powerful.

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Sicelo Sithole 17 April 2009

For all my life i have never thought that such small words can pack up so much content. a well thought poem.10++ regards, Vincent

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Deva De Silva 17 April 2009

Huh? I've bretrayed many by these standards...

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Ruth Walters 16 April 2009

Yes, in your head you can betray someone by what you long to do, I agree. It's a very wise sentence and one that I'm glad I read though. I have betrayed people in this way but never, ever gone through with it in reality and so my higher moral code has won the day. One cancels out the other and then there is no sin. It's called being faithful. We all have these longings and thoughts from time to time, that's what's called 'being human'.: -)

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Kurt Behle 15 April 2009

What else can he say Great write! ! !

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Indira Babbellapati 25 April 2009

makes me ponder...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Zoleka Lusiti 24 April 2009

Nice and short, leaves you with food for your brain and heart. Keep it up!

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 April 2009

Talk about motive and intention... Just to bare your imagination to people is something to think about.... Cheers. Subroto

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Tylor Cooks 21 April 2009

this poem makes u think of what betrayal could be or the many different types of betrayl good poem

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sky dreams 21 April 2009

this is a great expression! .. you don't have to do an action to betray someone, all's you have to do is think it.. great job!

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