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Between Going And Coming

Rating: 3.8
Between going and staying
the day wavers,
in love with its own transparency.
The circular afternoon is now a bay
where the world in stillness rocks.

All is visible and all elusive,
all is near and can’t be touched.

Paper, book, pencil, glass,
rest in the shade of their names.
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Khairul Ahsan 03 September 2020
'The Modern Poem of the Day' - this poem certainly deserves the honor! Congratulations to the poet, posthumously! 'I find myself in the middle of an eye, watching myself in its blank stare.' - These two lines cannot have a parallel. Outstanding! 'The moment scatters. Motionless, I stay and go: I am a pause.' - What a beautiful end to the poem! A masterly mark!
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Mahtab Bangalee 03 September 2020
to this earth everyone comes and goes, everyone does everything according to own mind satisfaction- maybe someone unable to do accordingly. But this is the life where sometimes this feelings come that it's a recycling circle of this whole universe; greatly written this poem
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Mahtab Bangalee 03 September 2020
All is visible and all elusive, all is near and can’t be touched. .... Time throbbing in my temples repeats the same unchanging syllable of bIood.....Ow fantastically crafted the pure feelings of life, death, earth, time and peoples mental condition;
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2020
Found this poem has been selected as the modern poem of the poem of the day for second time. Congratulations.
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Savita Tyagi 03 September 2020
Beautiful! So refreshingly reflective and eloquent in its expressions. Between come and go we are a pause.......
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Kenneth Maswabi 03 September 2020
Beautiful words that illuminate the poet's theatre of the mind...Thank you for sharing.
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Paul Brookes 03 September 2020
This is superb a poem of such expressiveness yes the pause the between states great write from a great poet.
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 September 2020
This is very outstanding so brilliantly crafted I am speechless 10++++
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Poetic Sky 28 August 2020
Awesome Paper, book, pencil, glass, rest in the shade of their names
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Edward Kofi Louis 03 September 2019
To and fro! ! ! The day wavers along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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