Between Two Hearts Poem by Heather Burns

Between Two Hearts

Rating: 3.8

Tucked away in the
secret chambers of
of two hearts

a love never to be

to speak about is
the pain too great

between two hearts
a love story

the flame continues
to glow
lasting a lifetime.

heather burns

Chandra Thiagarajan 30 July 2013

The glowing flame of love between two hearts is expressed in simple but profound manner! Lovely!

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Valsa George 30 July 2013

The sweet pangs of forbidden love, beautifully expressed! !

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Ramesh Rai 29 July 2013

OMG.just like to write the name of god.should i count it.thnx for sharing

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Wahab Abdul 29 July 2013

the hidden sadness expressed in the speak about is forbidden the pain too great..........................lovely poetry..

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 July 2013

well penned poem about forbidden love. let me end here.... Siya_! !

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 02 May 2020

I think we all have had that love that goes unspoken of for some reason or another. Your poem put it so simply and true.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 April 2019

This sounds familiar to me. Thank you for this loveliest poem, Heather.

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Tribhawan Kaul 10 July 2016

A lovely this one :)

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Bernard Snyder 18 June 2015

Short, yet so very sweet! Great one Heather!

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Sallam Yassin 05 August 2013

true love is a secret of two hearts -true lasting a lifetime

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