Catrina Heart


Beyond The Sunset - Poem by Catrina Heart

Radiance ruptured the firmament elsewhere
Blessing the unruffled western seas and oceans
A delightful emblem of stairway to heaven
As the shade of darkness creeping everywhere

Along the magnificent face of twilight
Where the sun is pulling along the drapes of night
Lazily burying its luster, spreading the shroud of dusk
Emotions framed my eyes, captured my nostalgic vibes

I see fine reflections of me arousing all certainty
Like sky’s mirage, nature of beauty to the sea
My blue almond eyes are on fire,
Feeling wet as pearls budding on one side

I witness the velvet haze in crimson shower, red-hot
As it meets the cold zephyr shivering my veins
Twilight is creeping struggling for gold
I see myself beyond the sunset where my future unfolds

O what a splendor, what beauty it paints does in its image
Beyond the sun, beyond the sky there are sands of time
I'm dreaming of bright tomorrow on the depths of the ocean
Half-journeyed, half-forgotten looms the vision in my mind

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Go! Beyond the devouring twilight,
Time shall say the ruins of yester nights
Sojourn to rest......... O dear sunset on the mist of sea
Shall I stride where winds will take my feet

Yet.........shall I build pillars
Imprinting goodwill on clouds and trees
Go! Bravely beyond sunset O dear
Go! Not worrying darkness on fields

Twilight shall soon shake hands with dawn
Where fresh morning dews shall bless all leaves
Spreading balms of spring fragrance, so sweet
An insignia of bright morrow on the glorious break of dawn


Comments about Beyond The Sunset by Catrina Heart

  • (2/23/2010 1:55:00 PM)


    this is a huge thoughtful poem with wast canvas, with wonderful imagery....well penned (Report) Reply

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  • (12/17/2009 3:10:00 AM)


    Very marvelous depiction of the dusk with a serene ocean canvas. Congrats! (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2009 12:45:00 AM)


    dear catrina,
    its so long since i have been around and read you.....this was a beautiful poem to start with......thanks for sharing.merry Christmas!
    love
    reshma
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  • Maia Padua (12/9/2009 5:45:00 AM)


    I love this, my friend
    really superbly composed
    words are enchanting....I read with awe
    a piece from Catrina...really amazing...
    as if I'm seeing sparks above me mingling with the colors of the sunset/dusk and a beautiful dawn as you stated here...
    really a stunning piece...lovely and flows with depth.....life beyond the sunset....
    I have a lot more to say to praise this piece but I wont be finished....so to end....
    this is EXCELLENT....
    10++++++

    Lovelots,


    Snow
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  • Sadiqullah Khan (12/9/2009 4:25:00 AM)


    The format, and a divide in between, putting it together in the same page reflects deep feelings and intense imagination not content really. Keep on saying whatever you want to say. We love reading your lines Catrina, (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2009 1:47:00 AM)


    captivating allusion....so refreshing...EXCELLENT! (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/9/2009 1:10:00 AM)


    Go! Beyond the devouring twilight,
    Time shall say the ruins of yester nights
    Sojourn to rest......... O dear sunset on the mist of sea
    Shall I stride where winds will take my feet

    Yet.........shall I build pillars
    Imprinting goodwill on clouds and trees
    Go! Bravely beyond sunset O dear
    Go! Not worrying darkness on fields

    Twilight shall soon shake hands with dawn
    Where fresh morning dews shall bless all leaves
    Spreading balms of spring fragrance, so sweet
    An insignia of bright morrow on the glorious break of dawn

    This is really beyond the sunset, a great poem from every aspect, Catrina. I know that I will read it again and again.
    Warm Regards.

    Naseer
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2009 8:10:00 AM)


    Dear Ms. Heart - your heart is here, that is why you have felt this so intensely that everything here is poemic, poesic, delightfully artistic.

    My heart goes singing... la la la...10+++
    (Report) Reply

  • Chandrashekar A Posy Poet (12/8/2009 6:00:00 AM)


    a brilliant composition............................. (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (12/8/2009 12:59:00 AM)


    'Beyond the Sunset' is the fountain of ecstatic bliss.
    CP
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  • (12/7/2009 9:58:00 PM)


    Go! Beyond the devouring twilight,
    Time shall say the ruins of yester nights
    Sojourn to rest......... O dear sunset on the mist of sea
    Shall I stride where winds will take my feet

    Yet.........shall I build pillars
    Imprinting goodwill on clouds and trees
    Go! Bravely beyond sunset O dear
    Go! Not worrying darkness on field

    beautiful spacing of beauties nature and warmth of passions, i adore your style
    (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/7/2009 9:49:00 PM)


    I'm dreaming of bright tomorrow on the depths of the ocean
    Half-journeyed, half-forgotten looms the vision in my mind

    this shows your depth.10
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  • Meggie Gultiano (12/5/2009 11:18:00 PM)


    Oh...what A VERY STUNNING write..rich in imagery and your flow of words are lovely.
    This is your poetry at your best..YOUR BEST..wow..
    Now, you have revealed yourself..the Princess of poetry..
    I love most these lines....

    witness the velvet haze in crimson shower, red-hot
    As it meets the cold zephyr shivering my veins
    Twilight is creeping struggling for gold
    I see myself beyond the sunset where my future unfolds
    (Report) Reply

  • Fay Slimm (12/5/2009 5:21:00 PM)


    Wow Catrina - - I was transported - - great write.....10 + + + Fay (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 4:03:00 PM)


    oh catrina excellence i see fantastically beautiful finished or not into my favs (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 2:59:00 PM)


    Goodness me! what fine wording
    Excellent flow of poetic word
    My goodness lady....
    These pieces of yours need to be publish
    My goodness....What a talent..what a talent..
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 2:50:00 PM)


    It does not need a title the content is enough 10 Daniel (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 10, 2011


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