Radiance ruptured the firmament elsewhere
Blessing the unruffled western seas and oceans
A delightful emblem of stairway to heaven
As the shade of darkness creeping everywhere
Along the magnificent face of twilight
Where the sun is pulling along the drapes of night
Lazily burying its luster, spreading the shroud of dusk
Emotions framed my eyes, captured my nostalgic vibes
I see fine reflections of me arousing all certainty
Like sky’s mirage, nature of beauty to the sea
My blue almond eyes are on fire,
Feeling wet as pearls budding on one side
I witness the velvet haze in crimson shower, red-hot
As it meets the cold zephyr shivering my veins
Twilight is creeping struggling for gold
I see myself beyond the sunset where my future unfolds
O what a splendor, what beauty it paints does in its image
Beyond the sun, beyond the sky there are sands of time
I'm dreaming of bright tomorrow on the depths of the ocean
Half-journeyed, half-forgotten looms the vision in my mind
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Go! Beyond the devouring twilight,
Time shall say the ruins of yester nights
Sojourn to rest......... O dear sunset on the mist of sea
Shall I stride where winds will take my feet
Yet.........shall I build pillars
Imprinting goodwill on clouds and trees
Go! Bravely beyond sunset O dear
Go! Not worrying darkness on fields
Twilight shall soon shake hands with dawn
Where fresh morning dews shall bless all leaves
Spreading balms of spring fragrance, so sweet
An insignia of bright morrow on the glorious break of dawn
Wow Catrina - - I was transported - - great write.....10 + + + Fay
Oh...what A VERY STUNNING write..rich in imagery and your flow of words are lovely. This is your poetry at your best..YOUR BEST..wow.. Now, you have revealed yourself..the Princess of poetry.. I love most these lines.... witness the velvet haze in crimson shower, red-hot As it meets the cold zephyr shivering my veins Twilight is creeping struggling for gold I see myself beyond the sunset where my future unfolds
I'm dreaming of bright tomorrow on the depths of the ocean Half-journeyed, half-forgotten looms the vision in my mind this shows your depth.10
Go! Beyond the devouring twilight, Time shall say the ruins of yester nights Sojourn to rest......... O dear sunset on the mist of sea Shall I stride where winds will take my feet Yet.........shall I build pillars Imprinting goodwill on clouds and trees Go! Bravely beyond sunset O dear Go! Not worrying darkness on field beautiful spacing of beauties nature and warmth of passions, i adore your style
this is a huge thoughtful poem with wast canvas, with wonderful imagery....well penned
Very marvelous depiction of the dusk with a serene ocean canvas. Congrats!
dear catrina, its so long since i have been around and read you.....this was a beautiful poem to start with......thanks for sharing.merry Christmas! love reshma
I love this, my friend really superbly composed words are enchanting....I read with awe a piece from Catrina...really amazing... as if I'm seeing sparks above me mingling with the colors of the sunset/dusk and a beautiful dawn as you stated here... really a stunning piece...lovely and flows with depth.....life beyond the sunset.... I have a lot more to say to praise this piece but I wont be finished....so to end.... this is EXCELLENT.... 10++++++ Lovelots, Snow
The format, and a divide in between, putting it together in the same page reflects deep feelings and intense imagination not content really. Keep on saying whatever you want to say. We love reading your lines Catrina,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
oh catrina excellence i see fantastically beautiful finished or not into my favs