Dejan Stojanovic

Rookie - 18 Points (March 11,1959 / Pec, Kosovo (the former Yugoslavia))

Big Miniature - Poem by Dejan Stojanovic

To transform a grimace into a sound
Sounds impossible, yet it is possible
To transform a vision into music,
To go outside an enslaved personality,
To become impersonal by transforming
Into sand, into water, into light,
To feel the air and breathe the air
By becoming the air, become
A bird, the first cell, the first man,
Become a wandering comet,
A dying star, a newborn cluster of stars
And hear the melody of galaxies,
Love making of black stars,
Sense the hellish or heavenly nature of quasars,
Be in everything and come back
To a miniscule particle of personality
To find out how great all is.

Comments about Big Miniature by Dejan Stojanovic

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (8/9/2017 11:00:00 PM)

    Be in everything and come back
    To a miniscule particle of personality
    To find out how great all is.

    A beautiful journey of awareness and transformation and
    then to comprehend the true nature of the good spirit within.

    Lovely poem Dejan. Congratulations!
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  • (8/9/2017 9:50:00 PM)

    An adventure of the mind and soul. Not certain if you meant this, but it most certainly sounds like astral travel. A brilliant piece of writing. Thoroughly enjoyed such vivid imagery. Congratulations on a well deserved Poem Of The Day, Dejan! (Report) Reply

  • Seamus O Brian (8/9/2017 5:04:00 PM)

    To contemplate the act of being, to understand existence beyond our own framework. A lively, colorful jaunt through the universe of being. An enjoyable journey, thank you for sharing this vision! (Report) Reply

  • Rini Jerry (8/9/2017 9:44:00 AM)

    An insightful poem
    Realise Who we are and where we ought to be, taste the tiniest to biggest particle of this universe
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (8/9/2017 7:48:00 AM)

    We are nothing but specks of dust in this vast universe. With great imagery you help us visit the ever expanding universe. Thanks for sharing and congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Jeanette Telusma (8/9/2017 6:45:00 AM)

    - - - -To transform a vision into music,
    To go outside an enslaved personality- - - A lovely poem in its entirety. Thanks for sharing, congratulations.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/9/2017 5:50:00 AM)

    Wonderful imaginary. Beautifully penned on cosmos. Thanks and congratulation for the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Lantz Pierre (8/9/2017 3:31:00 AM)

    This seems like kind of a list poem without any sort of supporting argument that the adventure will, or even can, lead to the conclusion of how great all is. Maybe for you, but there's no emotional investment described to convince me that it might be so for me. I need more than just the list of different perspectives, the physical aspects, if the result is to add up to a sum greater than the parts. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (8/9/2017 2:39:00 AM)

    a very thoughtful poem of what maybe? to what is and then on to what will be? ....................beautifully written DS. (Report) Reply

  • (8/9/2017 1:57:00 AM)

    What a unique poem with a galaxy of thought and a great meditative recipe to rise above daily mundane irritations. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (8/9/2017 1:50:00 AM)

    Such a galactic and cosmic poem....... Perfect vote.++++++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • (8/9/2016 4:53:00 PM)

    Very interesting piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • (8/9/2016 1:49:00 PM)

    You probably wont read this since it appears you have not been here for awhile, but great work, a wonderfully evocative subject, the universe is an amazing place when you think about it. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Barry Middleton (8/9/2016 9:01:00 AM)

    How great is World and Universe. Very good poem, (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (8/9/2016 5:40:00 AM)

    It is really great idea and great imagination expressed through poetry.Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/9/2016 4:27:00 AM)

    Of black stars! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • (8/9/2016 4:05:00 AM)

    sounds like a great voyage in empathy and imagination. Most impressed
    with the ideas expressed, Dejan. very refreshing piece of writing.

    Tom Billsborough
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, March 15, 2013

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