Forbidden garden were planted with black roses
Emitting smells of long gone corpses
Abandoned for purity
Extricated from beneath of sunken earth
The soils were crumpling and humid
Turning it into after burnt colors
Trespassers wouldn’t take a second look
To determine what’s left for Hell
Is not left for Heaven
The brooding and legitimate darkness
Of impurities will soon
Breeds the seeds of Satan impersonating priests
All Hell breaks loose
Somebody with empowerment and virgin
Have to seal the floodgate
Children’s of the damned are crusading
An army of bona fide blasphemies
Exorcising the wicket link
Pathfinders will soon start
Surveying the pinnacles
The annihilation of the world
More prophecy than poetry.You've certainly 'got it right'. Salaam!
i can understand the agony of the current scenario of spiritualism devoid of love and divinity....great piece
an angry poem! I liked the content! ! ! Forbidden garden were planted with black roses Emitting smells of long gone corpses-----> you chose the suitable words 100% right...
All Hell breaks loose Somebody with empowerment and virgin Have to seal the floodgate --------------- he already unlocked the west side paradise door souls from the transmigrated land paced into the land a bright light arised
Striking imagery. Correct the grammatical mistakes and it gets a 10! Is English your first language?
Ideology’s desire to make its own canon and perspective the only acceptable choice results in intolerance and persecution as all other perspectives are denounced as heretical or perhaps even evil. Kind regards Aine
i really like the words used. i see it.... good job...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
this is a very celestial poem, i think.....it has powerful diction, tone and apt imagery...so beautifully writen....i read it over and over and i loved it, a lot...Bravo!