Blindfold Poem by louis rams

Blindfold

Rating: 5.0


this is the time in my life
when all i see is you.
a time in my life, when
i don't know what to do.

you touched my life like no one could
and my life turned from light to dark blue.

what will it take for you to love me?
there is so much more to me
than the human eye can see.

my love for you is like the light
yellow moon, rising in the east
and like the bright orange sun
going down in the west.
24 hours in all its glory
this is my love, this is my story.


if you was to take off the blindfold
so that you could see
you would surely fall in love with me.
for my love is so deep and so wide
that it covers the entire sky.

when i go to bed at night
there you are in plain sight.
and when i wake in the morning
and open up my eyes
i see you standing by my side.

you are with me 24/7, and makes me
feel like i'm in heaven.

so all i ask is that you take
a chance with me.
and i will set your heart free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a lovely wrute sir..beautifuly done

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Christine Kerr 29 April 2009

The many things I enjoy about your poems Louis are their warmth and easy understandable nature, Thanks for sharing

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 April 2009

Well expressed and nicely penned. Few lines are really good. '24/7...heaven' a unique rhyming too. Well written.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 May 2009

Truly love is 24x7 business................Good Write...........

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2009

you are with me 24/7, and makes me feel like i'm in heaven. so all i ask is that you take a chance with me. and i will set your heart free...........sometimes it results into blind folding of a person who sees nothign except lovee. this is delicate positionand it is true also that it may homest feeling with love... very beautiful feeling for beloved....10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

special way to express feeling! very impressive!

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Reshma Ramesh 06 May 2009

this is a sweet love poem.............well penned

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 May 2009

Love is vast like sky and deep like sea. It sets the hearts free. Love is in full bloom in this beautiful poem.......10/10. Regards Naseer

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Kesav Easwaran 01 May 2009

Love feelings lovingly expressed...blinded by love...well wrtten piece, Louis...10

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