Bloom Like Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Bloom Like

Rating: 5.0


Bloom like
The cestrum nocturnum
Spreading the astonishing
Sweet fragrance to the passerby
Sparkle like the falling stars
Fulfilling the desires
Of the messed up hearts
Tread on the path of derveshes
Making your life beneficial
To recuperate the humankind.


© Aarzoo Mehek

*cestrum nocturnum: Nightqueen flower

Bloom Like
Thursday, July 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: heart love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 16 July 2020

Tread on the path of derveshes To recuperate the humankind.... //.... Only a poet with a heart of gold and the beats of a Sufi can perceive such a sublime flower 'Fulfilling the desires' of one and all by its divine fragrance. You are indeed a great poet of nature. Thanks, Aarzoo ji.

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 July 2020

In the famous poem “Veena Poovu”, the great Malayalam poet of yesteryears, Kumaran Aasan has sung thus: ...... സദാ നിശി പാന്ഥപാദം ബാധിച്ചു രൂക്ഷശില വാഴ് വതിൽ നിന്നു മേഘ- ജ്യോതിസ്സുതൻ ക്ഷണികജീവിതമല്ലി കാമ്യം? Is the life of a lightning, which lasts for just a fraction of a second, much desirable than the long (may be eternal) life of a hard stone that may injure the feet of a traveler? ((Contd)

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Sharad Bhatia 16 July 2020

It's so beautiful poem... Thankyou for sharing M'am...

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 July 2020

A wonderfully crafted composition. Simply splendid....10++❤️❤️❤️

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 July 2020

To spread along! To bloom! ! ! With the muse of peace. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 19 July 2020

Awesome, Life of a dervesh, which is full of mysteries and surprises. Simple for them and complicated for others. I liked it,10++

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Anjandev Roy 18 July 2020

To recuperate the human kind.......magnificent.....anjandev roy.

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The power of fragrance alone can do the nagic.....meaningful...10

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 July 2020

Part 2 (For the lighting may be able to guide the traveler away from the injuries that the stone may impart!) Exactly in a similar way, the life of a fragrant flower, however short it might be, is much desirable. For its fragrance and lovely sight might be able to soothe “messed up hearts”... Wonderfully poetic expression. I tend to wonder, how two great poets think alike, Aashan and Aarzoo! ! ! !

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