Books Poem by Valsa George

i always have my dessert served on a salver. if you wrote a book page on one of them, i'd eat that also! I’ll send this gem to MyPoemList before I finish the comment! - - - - - - - - - - - - - Bri's FORM FOR COMMENTING ON POEMS: [n/a = not applicable to this poem] Poem Comment Form As my shoulder I did abuse, here is what may amuse: A poem-comment “form”; I know it ain’t the norm. But if I write comments TOO long, I’ll never hear the end of the song: “Bri, I Told You, Take Care Of Shoulder; You’re Young No More & Getting Older”. So this simple form I have devised. Don’t look at me! Are you so surprised? If I use the form I MAY have more time … to read more poems with, or without, rhyme. After all, I can’t read and NOT comment, and if you must have MORE input ……….from me … send me a request ……….., though “more” AIN’T free. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Sizzling thoughts Baked in burning skulls Sliced and served In salvers white, Before starving minds! A. I enjoyed it: Yes _x_x_ ; No___ ; I’m not telling___ B. I understood it: Yes_x__; No___; I’m not sure___ C. I enjoyed the: Rhyming _n/a__; Rhythm_xx__; Originality_xx__; Cleverness__xx_; Humor/Humour_x__; Seriousness__x_; Sensuality_n/a__; Humanity_n/a__; Alliterations_xx__; Personal touch_n/a_; Other __________ D. It makes me want to read more of your poems: Yes_xx__; No___; I’m not telling___ E. The use of English was: Impeccable/good_x__; Deplorable/bad___; In between _(see above) __; No comment___ F. Could use proofreading: Yes___; No_x__; You decide___ THANKS FOR SHARING. bri :)

Wow wonderful description of book dear mam!

Oh such a creative write really makes me proud of you.....Valsa......simply phenomenal.......

Innovative poem, mmm.. Yummy! Fast meting on my tongue, love it, I should crave for more, thank you for share!

Sizzling thoughts Baked in burning skulls Sliced and served In salvers white, Before starving minds! ......fantastic expression on a metaphorical base. Wonderful imaginary. Marvelous poem.

Fantastic short write....thank u. anjandev roy.

Brilliant write, books would be like a buffet, but sizzling thoughts baked and sliced served to starving minds would I think be more like poems like this beautiful petite five-liner. But it is subjective.

When I was young, I loved to read but could not afford the books, now that they are readily available in the net, my eyes are giving me trouble. This is a gem Valsa, Thanks

Highly imaginative write. As e books are published, there is less demands in general books. Beautifully crafted.