Br@ve He@rt$ Poem by tanvi damle

Br@ve He@rt$

Rating: 3.8


This is for my people who just lost somebody,
their best friend, their baby, man or their lady,
put your heads real high,
we will never say bye.
The terrorist not only did the innocent kill,
but also dampened our spirits & weakened our will.
They went around slaughtering people mercilessly,
putting an end to humanity.
There were pleas for help & cries of fear,
as our country was covered by the reign of terror.
As we searched frantically with our tired eyes,
wishing our loved one survives.
We are nothing without them we realize,
as we hope & pray for them to come out alive.
In our beds silently we sat & a tribute paid,
to the soldiers and the innocent who were shot dead.
As the brave hearts continue to our country defend,
as they try their best to bring this bloodshed to an end.
Our hearts are filled with hurt & despair,
as we see blood and bodies everywhere.
We all feel so sad and all alone,
as we sit & the loss of our loved one's mourn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Autumn Stoddard 26 December 2008

Beautiful, and relateable. It was an overall good read, however I do believe that in line 15, you accidently put a c in silently.

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Ency Bearis 25 December 2008

great poem...bravely written with strong feeling about the tragic incident..nicely narrated..

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Naidz Ladia 25 December 2008

terrorist hve brave hearts to destroy and kill people, while heroes hve also their hearts to defend and do good things in their country..whom do u think owned the weak hearts, ill tell u, , , not the heroes... UR POEM S NICE, I CAN RELATE ON THAT COZ ITS REALLY HAPPENING..everyone are sacrificing just to survive..

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Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2008

touching and beautiful...i can feel the patriotism and the agony inside...i share your feels, Tanvi...good presentation in rich rhyming scheme...10

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Kallie Madison 05 December 2008

your poem is great! !

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Jenel Shain 26 January 2010

wow, nice, just ur not suppose to take out lyrics of a song, unless u get the permission from the singer. But it is really touching, and good.

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g black black 25 January 2010

nice tanvi, , at first i thought that it was marria carey bye song and then i keeped reading i was like oh thats not it good job

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Peter Strugnell 23 January 2010

not an easy subject but beautifully taken on by tanvi

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Adeline Foster 21 January 2010

Tanvi: Very good, it expresses the sorrow of all of us for those who lose their lives in disasters around the world. So many are mourning their loved ones. Adeline

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Aira Olayvar 19 January 2010

The mood of the poem is very strong… since it talks about the mourns and the sorrows of those who has been affected with this certain scenarios of life.

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