Break Free Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Break Free

Rating: 5.0


I saw one bird like me
Living on a dead tree
Waiting for long to see
Pouring shower of glee
On its lonely broken lee

It doesn’t have a he
Nor even a she
Or a hands of three
To hear its silent plea
For making gloom flee

Nights it rains like sea
Days it sings like bee
Whatever case it may be
It shares honey of key
To make all feel happy

It felled on its knee
Prayed in deep agree
Said I will be emcee
Will perform a jubilee
For it I’m breaking free

I smiled and said, its we

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

very nice.. of course you made it rhyme well.

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Saadat Tahir 15 July 2009

to me it sounded like the eagle-song of the CREE indian-american people very very nice i recommend u do an unrelated but beautiful piece on utube vanishing bread-instrumental i'd send u the link but PH parses the links on paste also do.....elcondor pasa...andean flute or if u can get then by... Paul Mauriat cheers

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 July 2009

very musical indeed., .. great comparison between the poet and the bird.. hey i compare my self with many people and many things too... this is a nice write indeed.. thanks for this one..nice narrative indeed, , , liked it very much. with love shan

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Ted M 10 July 2009

Good flow, excellent ryhme, lovely idea. The spirit in us likes to break free, free from those shackles which are holding us back. fly robin fly. 10+++

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Eyan Desir 10 July 2009

Nice rhyming flow 10s

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Indira Renganathan 31 January 2010

I smiled and said, its we.....everyone else along with you....nice thought well penned

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Walterrean Salley 24 December 2009

There's nothing like freedom

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Dev Poet 09 November 2009

I like your style of writing

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Antonio Liao 23 July 2009

cheer as the poem push my heart to reach the echelon of the highest point of desire.....a wish come in a simple template and sound of the soul shout for joy...a lovely poem of today...a 10 +

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premji premji 20 July 2009

freedom.......what a precious and painful word...........

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