Breeze Poem by Rebecca Navarre
Breeze
As the autumn breeze's in, and the
leaves on the trees, are changing again.
And the golden sun seems more deeper,
than then. As the wind whispers, and
another life began's.
leaves on the trees, are changing again. And the golden sun seems more deeper...captivating expression. A magnificent poem. Top score.
Nice thoughts. I concur with the changes suggested by poet Kim Barney. We are missing you. Please come back with new poems and comments soon!
May I suggest the following changes? As the autumn breezes in, and the leaves on the trees are changing again, and the golden sun seems deeper than then. As the wind whispers, and another life begins.
A well composed piece, dear Ma’am Rebecca...10++ Please read my new poem READ EVERY BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSION. Thanks.
A lovely poem that captures the wonders of autumn. Great imagery, Rebecca.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Autumn is coming, poetry blossoms!
Thank you! .. Kostas, God bless! ..