Bri Edwards Tries To Sell His Book Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Bri Edwards Tries To Sell His Book

Rating: 5.0

Poor Bri planned on selling his book,
and oh, what an effort it took!
The first publisher said,
sadly shaking his head,
'This is nothing but gobbledygook! '

So Bri then revised it a bit,
and was sure he had made it a hit,
but he felt like a sap
when the very next chap
said 'We surely can't publish this crap! '

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Bri tells me that he is thinking about having a book of his poetry published, so I thought I would give him a little bit of 'encouragement'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 03 November 2024

noun: gobbledegook language that is meaningless or is made unintelligible by excessive use of abstruse technical terms;

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Fantastic encouragement, Kim. Bri needs and his poems deserve this "support"… Hilarious! Enjoyed.

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Kim Barney 02 November 2024

I'm just jerking your chain, Bri! Your book has as good a chance of being published as mine has! Good luck!

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Belle Wassermeister 02 November 2024

If Bri's sister is on the editorial staff, they will certainly not publish it!

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Belle Wassermeister 01 November 2024

Ha ha ha ha ha! I love the last line, and the unexpected rhyme. You were too clever to use the expected word.

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M. Asim Nehal 04 November 2024

Nice encouragement to keep him busy editing his work. I liked it Kim.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 November 2024

lol Kim You put a smile on my face on a terrible day! ! Bravo TFS

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Rob Lamberton 03 November 2024

Made me laugh!

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Bri Edwards 03 November 2024

***** and to my Favorites. AND I saw a Notificaation that Belle (aka Linda Bella Wassermeister) has commented on my poem regarding she and I 'kissing' as we reunited in everlasting fairy tale love. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 03 November 2024

Gee, this, by Kim Barney, is a real guffaw***! ;))))) *** GUFFAW: a loud and boisterous laugh. Similar: hearty laugh loud laugh roar of laughter hoot of laughter

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