Poor Bri planned on selling his book,
and oh, what an effort it took!
The first publisher said,
sadly shaking his head,
'This is nothing but gobbledygook! '
So Bri then revised it a bit,
and was sure he had made it a hit,
but he felt like a sap
when the very next chap
said 'We surely can't publish this crap! '
Fantastic encouragement, Kim. Bri needs and his poems deserve this "support"… Hilarious! Enjoyed.
I'm just jerking your chain, Bri! Your book has as good a chance of being published as mine has! Good luck!
If Bri's sister is on the editorial staff, they will certainly not publish it!
Ha ha ha ha ha! I love the last line, and the unexpected rhyme. You were too clever to use the expected word.
Nice encouragement to keep him busy editing his work. I liked it Kim.
lol Kim You put a smile on my face on a terrible day! ! Bravo TFS
***** and to my Favorites. AND I saw a Notificaation that Belle (aka Linda Bella Wassermeister) has commented on my poem regarding she and I 'kissing' as we reunited in everlasting fairy tale love. : ) bri
Gee, this, by Kim Barney, is a real guffaw***! ;))))) *** GUFFAW: a loud and boisterous laugh. Similar: hearty laugh loud laugh roar of laughter hoot of laughter
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
noun: gobbledegook language that is meaningless or is made unintelligible by excessive use of abstruse technical terms;