Bri In New York City .....[fantasy? ; Short? ; Humor? ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri In New York City .....[fantasy? ; Short? ; Humor? ]

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I'm with mate in Harlem on Manhattan island,
Which is closer to home than if in Thailand.
We've taken 3 taxicabs and somehow survived.
I fainted twice but, by luck, I was revived.

Tomorrow we visit Museum of Natural History,
where to all there I shall be a Big Mystery.
"Is it a freak of Nature? " They all may ask.
To decide the answer 'twill be a daunting task.


(November...29th...2017)

Wednesday, November 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous,science
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am in NYC and typing on mate's tablet.How did i do?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 29 November 2017

I hope my editing works soon. There were a few typos when i first submitted. Bre :)

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Loke Kok Yee 12 January 2018

A freak of Nature? I am not sure But Darwin would know; that I am sure. If it is confirmed; there is no cure A life in the zoo; you've to endure Thanks Bri

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Valsa George 10 January 2018

Seeing you a 'freak of Nature ' they might think of moving you to the zoo..... a simple transfer from museum to zoo! By the way why did you faint....? At the sight of some formidable foe or physical exhaustion due to overeating?

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Savita Tyagi 10 December 2017

Enjoy the museum. Leave question answer session aside!

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Mj Lemon 05 December 2017

Fainting? Bri, I hope that was out of awe....or joy....or rapture....anything positive. Great homage to NY these words are! Hope you discover or unearth profound mysteries on the museum trip. A great verse....A 10.

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Kim Barney 03 December 2017

Well... did they decide if you were a freak of nature, or not? To have them make such a choice, don't put them on the spot!

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